Shadow (the_shadow_rising)
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Update & Excerpt
🕑 Added 2022-10-14 18:06:01 +0000 UTCHi all,
So it's been a while since I updated. Basically I've been unwell, busy, and in a bad place mentally so I've been dealing with that and being quiet. I'm still dealing with it (I have no time at the moment because of RL) but I am hoping I am on the mend. Nothing to worry about, just not great.
While there are no updates here is an excerpt for you all again. This was a rejected introduction to the third Wishes instalment. I won't be using this and I'll be going back to the idea I had before this. Basically I rejected that idea and then wrote this, but then after a while I thought the original idea was much more suitable for the story so I'll be going back to that when I write Wishes 3. So here you go, have a nine year old introduction that I rejected.
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The sweltering heat of the summer’s sun faded only slightly as the searing golden orb vanished beneath the horizon behind a shimmer of heat, leaving the great city of Shorehaven comfortably simmering in the season’s warmth as night fell and neon light and street lamps painted the darkening sky with their unnatural glow.
The baking metropolis hummed with life – a life that differed yet remained so much the same from that which occurred during the light. For most work had finished, and play had begun…their illicit moans and erotic encounters already underway…but ‘play’ never really ceased within Shorehaven…it was not called the City of Taboo Dreams for nothing after all, yet at night it just seemed more alive. And so it was that as the City cooked, even in the slightly lesser heat of the night, its inhabitants stripped – and not all due to the warmth…and not only for those that they should have been stripping for…
Soon, however, the City would be aflame with hidden, and not-so-hidden, passions, and lust would surge through the streets like the rays of the sun had earlier that day…just like it had earlier that day in the small two-bedroom apartment in Gainborough of Alicia Brookes and Nick Greeves.
That apartment had seen more than its fair share of lust and illicit sex over the last few weeks, starting with Nick telling his sexy girlfriend of his fantasy to watch her have sex with someone else…the escalating heat as the couple role-played the idea ever more realistically…until the final culmination the night before of Eric Carlson, Nick’s friend and co-worker, playing ‘strip Guitar Hero’ with Alicia before giving her the best sex of her life on her and Nick’s bed while Nick watched hornily a few feet away. Oh, but the apartment had seen more action than that…as Alicia, the beautiful 21-year-old brunette girlfriend, had woke up that night as they all lay sleeping naked together and, with Nick watching as he held her from behind, sucked Eric’s big dick until her came forcefully down her throat. But even then the apartment hadn’t seen enough of hot sex…as when the three had awoken and Nick had gone to work, leaving Alicia horny and alone with his friend, Eric had quickly managed to slide his big cock once more into Nick’s girlfriend before fucking her ruthlessly on the kitchen counter…then nailing her in her and Nick’s bed again, before Alicia had fallen to her knees and sucked his long, hard cock – swallowing and being covered in his cum – just moments before Nick had come home.
Of course, the loving boyfriend had no idea what his friend and girlfriend had been up to while he had been away, nor had he any idea that Alicia had promised to have sex with Eric again…and again…and again…or of the other hot thoughts that had filled her mind while he showered…but oh, had that apartment been filled with deeply appreciative moans, groans, and screams of illicit ecstasy all day…
…In fact, as the warm summer’s heat suffused the small apartment, the walls seemed uncharacteristically quiet after so much noise from the last twenty-four hours…whether it was from Alicia, the bed, the headboard, or the mattress springs…but all of that was about to change, at least that’s what Alicia Brookes thought as she stood checking her make up in the small mirror above the sink as she listened to her boyfriend of a year and a half place the dishes in the dishwasher through the bathroom’s wooden door.
The beautiful 21-year-old brunette girlfriend smiled to herself as she heard Nick curse as he dropped a plate that luckily, by the sounds of it, didn’t smash as she ran a finger against the corner of her soft lips before adjusting the straps of her slinky crimson dress that looked more like a sexy piece of lingerie than an elegant evening dress. Setting the straps just so on her slender shoulders, Alicia looked at her reflection in the mirror and smiled pleasantly before looking down and running her hands over her barely-covered hips. Nick was certainly going to change the quietness of the apartment soon…at least if she had anything to say about it anyway…Alicia thought as she looked down at herself.
The dress was gorgeous – and wearing it she knew that she looked incredibly hot, and Nick had definitely shown that to be true – but there was just something…not right about it. It was probably the fact that it seemed like too much to wear for a night in, even if it was meant to be a romantic night and Nick had bought the dress for her as a surprise. Though it was really nice…short, low-cut, clingy, yet tasteful in each of those ways. But still, there was something...Alicia thought as she ran her slender hands over her stomach before placing them on her slim waist and looking back up at her reflection.
Checking her lipstick with one finger again, Alicia was about to dismiss the thought – as it probably was just because of the seeming waste…she didn’t even have any shoes on! – when suddenly something clicked in her mind and her finger froze.
Whether it was the way that her hand rested on her slender waist, the feel of the dress on her bare thighs or around her swelling breasts, or the way her finger traced her soft lips, Alicia Brookes suddenly knew what seemed wrong with the perfectly beautiful dress…it wasn’t that it was a waste just to wear it in the apartment…it was because it seemed like it was a waste that Eric, her sweet boyfriend’s friend who had not only fulfilled Nick’s fantasy of fucking her in front of him – but ‘really’ fucked her almost senseless behind his back – wasn’t seeing her in this gorgeous, slinky, almost-lingerie-like dress…what would he think…what would he do…if he was the one to see her in it?
That thought, and the sudden realization made Alicia’s stomach turn flips in surprise and excitement, which was intensified even more as flashes from the day…and the night before…raced through her mind; memories of living out her loving boyfriend’s fantasy of having sex with his well-hung friend in their bed…images of Eric’s hard cock sliding into her mouth as she sucked his cock while Nick held her from behind…and then…intensely vivid recollections of how she had cheated on Nick and let Eric fuck the life out of her in the kitchen while Nick had gone to work, before taking him into their bedroom and having sex with him again, before finally sucking his dick again moments before Nick had walked through the door.
Fuck, but her boyfriend’s big-dicked friend had screwed her incredibly good…and oh fuck had she loved every second of it! So much, in fact, that she still fully intended on keeping her promise of letting him get his dick back into her – and soon, hopefully – despite how in love with her handsome, caring boyfriend she was.
Looking back down at the dress, Alicia ran her hands onto her flat stomach and down towards her thighs, brushing lightly against her pussy before she slid her hands up and onto her large, heaving breasts as her mind tingled with thoughts of what Eric would do to her right then if he saw her…probably even while Nick waited on the other side of the door for her. Those thoughts, and the memories of her boyfriend’s friend’s hands on her and his big nine-inch cock inside her, caused the sexy girlfriend’s body to tingle and shudder just as much as her mind did and her breathing to deepen as she looked up into her now glowing eyes.
This time Alicia Brookes’ smile was far more hornily playful than pleased as she stood there cupping her large, heavy breasts and watched her lips curve teasingly…those same lips that had only a few hours before been locked around her boyfriend’s friend’s hard cock as she bobbed her head up and down his thick shaft just before he shot his thick cum down her throat and all over her face and tits…cum that Alicia had only just managed to rub into her skin before Nick had walked into the room to hug her…
That memory brought another shudder through her sexy body and a bolt of tingling lust-filled excitement through her still slightly-sore pussy – as did the feel of her hands on her breasts…Eric had held them just the same as she rode his big dick earlier in her and Nick’s bed.
For a moment all that the gorgeous girlfriend could do was relive that day in her mind as she remembered every touch, every kiss, every deep and hard thrust into her, and wonder at how she had gone from being Nick’s loving, faithful girlfriend to desperately enjoying his friend’s big cock so much that she fully intended to have him inside her again…and again…and again…
Finally, however, another crash from outside the door snapped Alicia back from her thoughts and she felt her heart skip a beat as she realized that she had been standing there daydreaming about her boyfriend’s friend and his amazing cock while her actual boyfriend was waiting for her in the other room so that they could carry on their ‘special’, romantic, loving night together.
Taking a deep breath to settle herself – which did nothing for the crimson colour of her cheeks or the playful glint in her large grey eyes – Alicia pushed the thoughts of Nick’s friend from her mind. That was no easy task, but she managed…she was just glad that she wasn’t as insatiably horny as she had been that morning…
…That thought again made the gorgeous brunette think of Eric fucking the life out of her…he had been what had released all of her pent up lust after all…however Alicia quickly regained her composure again as she tried to focus on Nick. There was plenty of time to remember, and look forward to, sex with Eric after all…but tonight was about her and Nick. The oddness of that thought, or of the love that she felt swelling in her heart as she thought fondly of her sweet boyfriend of a year and a half, was lost on the beautiful brunette.
And so, Alicia Brookes pushed any thoughts and memories of Nick’s friend and his big, hard…taking another deep breath, Alicia cleared her mind again and focused on Nick and how much she loved him as she once more unnecessarily checked her appearance in the mirror.
She looked gorgeous. There was no other way to describe Alicia Brookes – the hot, 21-year-old girlfriend of Nick Greeves. The dress was sexy, no two ways about it, and showed off her long, slender legs perfectly, just as it emphasized her slim waist, flat stomach, her tight ass, and the swell of her succulent 36D tits. Her long, light-brunette hair, with its highlights running through, hung loose over her shoulders and down her slender back, while her large grey eyes seemed larger with the faint eye-make up that matched the lipstick painting her soft lips.
Running her fingers through a small lock of hair that hung down by her ear before setting it just right beside her soft cheek, Alicia smiled once more at herself as she thought of what Nick’s reaction when he had first seen her in the dress earlier…that had only gotten stronger, and Alicia planned on making it more so…after all, Nick had promised to treat her like a queen tonight and make up for the sex that they…well, he…had missed that morning…and Alicia could hardly wait.
And so, with a playful sway of her hips, the beautiful 21-year-old brunette turned and opened the bathroom door…the same door that Eric had pressed her against a few hours earlier while Nick had been in the shower…before she headed through into the apartment’s lounge-kitchen.
Comments
Thank you, I appreciate that. I want to get to work on the next stories, just need everything to come together. As for the intro, glad you liked it. I will be changing it completely though as it doesn't fit what I have in mind for the start of the story. I have something better in mind. I hope you'll like it when I get back to it.
northdrop
Feel better, bud!! Your last story was an absolute smash and we are happy to wait for the next:) you may remember that Wishes is just favorite story you’ve written to date; this intro is such a tease ;) I can’t wait to read it!
I appreciate that, thank you.
Elmer Fudd
Appreciate the update Shadow! Sorry RL is being rough on you again! Certainly know how that goes. Take care of what you need to as you are able, most of us will still be here when you come back!
