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Chapter 202 - The Second Quest

🕑 Added 2023-02-09 11:45:53 +0000 UTC

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Northstar

Every time I see Lerorio all I can think of is that dweeb in business casual from hunterXhunter

Gamer4Life

lol... I'll keep that in mind

I liked this chapter. I enjoy it when the MC is the smartest person in the room and revealing plans in front of enemies is always fun. I know you have heard a variety of opinions about it...I will say I enjoy your filler. Feel free to put as much into the story as you want. Also plenty of speeches and smugly revealing plans/explaining jutsu from both the good guys and the bad guys is welcome too.

General_Rain

It could be interesting if he learns about barrier techniques from a Nara Clan member before the Chunin exam or cooking from an Akimichi restaurant as it's his hobby he could even teach them about making icecream and snow cones as the main deserts it cannon were dango.

General_Rain

Ah it's too bad Daichi never was taught by a member of the Nara clan because they are usually five or more steps ahead of their opponents especially in chess as apposed to Daichi only being one to two steps. Lol

Shiro

No need to be so rude🤨 There are many other ways to tell your opinion without belittling another’s hard work..

Nate

when i think of the 2 chapters as a whole then it makes for a great conclusion to the mystery case, detective conan style. thanks for the 'whole' chapter.

Itachi Asakura

the rest of the story is really great

Gamer4Life

This chapter and the previous one were originally wrote together but the word count was like 6k+. So I decided to split the chapter. Perhaps that's why some might see it as filler... hmm.. that's an oversight on my part...

Itachi Asakura

yeah "GOOD" filler or flashback. This chapter you can not say it was good, we readers know this already. I like this story but today i found the chapter redundant.

Gamer4Life

Well, every story needs a good filler/flashback 😅😅😅

Hadrian512

Eh, felt like he was just recounting things we already knew/ figured out in the flashback. Felt kinda like filler.

Gamer4Life

If you are reffering to Jedayu, then yes. he got played. Daichi was one step ahead at every turn

Kyleah Parker

In other words you got played


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