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Chapter 194 - Joint D Rank Mission

🕑 Added 2023-01-24 14:23:31 +0000 UTC

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Arrimar26

Awesome chapter !

Kyleah Parker

The analogy with the fish was good but like he said there is a difference between human and fish

HeadpatsOnly

the missions you come up with are honestly so fun to read. if the story ends and there was no plot i would still continue to read if every chapter after were just shorts about random missions haha

Shin

That quest is still in progress

Subzero Cool65

I might be mistaken but does he still have the quest to heal his grandfather's friend from his illness or did he already do it and I missed it

Shin

no need to tell everyone but it would be a great show of trust to at least inform his Grandpa about "some" of his abilities he is already suspicious enough as is ;)

Gamer4Life

its an idea. but i would like to keep the vitality absorption a secret .... an ace move for when the time comes

Shin

Hmm since many people already suspect he has a kekei genkai his ability to absorb other peoples vitality could be used as his "bloodline awakening" So at least his grandpa knows what he can do

Gamer4Life

lol

Victorien Michel

It's good that you don't make a time skip and directly into cannon. You can also add more devellopement into charactere and create something more than a variation of cannon like you said. You doing a great job, juste that child labor might be at your back with the amount of work (training, grinding and skill practice) that you put on Daichi (If it wasn't because of Gamer Mind+Body, he would be worse than a Black Company's salaryman)

Gamer4Life

i do keep a record of all jutsus daichi uses. its in word. ill create an excell sheet and upload it by the end of this month

terrance smith

I also agree with everyone but I believe that I should point out a plot hole that you created in this story. At the beginning of the story, you kept track of the ninjutsu that Daichi learned and his mastery over them but now I doubt any of us readers know the type/number/mastery of the ninjutsu,genjutsu that he can use. At the very least you should make a spreadsheet on the type of ninjutsu and genjutsu that he knows

Damien Hohn

I like the pace and the original missions you create. This separates you from others because it's your creativity and top tier story telling is what draws others in. Thanks as always.

Gamer4Life

thank you.. i will do my best

I am greatly enjoying all of the extra chapters and "filler" you are making. This story has been incredible and very different than the other Naruto fanfics I have read. I said this before on a comment but I want to say it again. The changes you have made in the story are top tier. I hope you continue to make changes like you did to the fire lord and with the third hokage bringing back the second for help. I also enjoy the idea of kakashi becoming even more formidable learning space time jutsu and getting to be more like minato. I know you have a larger audience to please...but I will just say that you should do more filler with missions including tracking, espionage, kidnapping, rescue and assassinations. The missions you have made up make sense in the ninja world. It is nice to see the characters acting more like ninja and less like battle mages. Though when things get going having characters that are walking elemental canons is fun to see. Keep going man, you have a great story and great ideas that are very entertaining. The additions you are making create a unique story. Don't feel the need to rush to the "main" story-line. Your own ideas are wonderful.

I love the original arcs, you’ve really given an in depth look of daichi as a character. Good job🫶🏾

Gamer4Life

thanks

Aden Harrison

At the start, the chakra stat should show 500 instead of 416. Keep up the good work :D


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