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[DR SPOILERS | Original art | Comic | WIP] The First One To Care
🕑 Added 2025-06-16 06:36:12 +0000 UTCI always get emotional when thinking about this scene in Deltarune.
She was the first one to care.
Susie does not forget those who care.
Early rough sketch: First I draft some quick poses and the early iterations for the panels in the comic.
Revised page 1 sketch: I wasn't sure about the logistics on when this event happened in the game, but just in case I updated the sketch for Susie to look more like the version of her in the game.
Page 1 bases: With the sketch done, I just went ahead and placed the flat colors for all objects in the scene for all panels
Page 1 details: Then I added all the shadows and highlights manually, with a soft brush, the idea is to make everything look like it's tender, loving flashback from Susie.
Page 1 dialogues: Basically the same except with the dialogues from Toriel.
All other pages were done similarly, (very proud of how I did Toriel's robes here!)
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