Icymasamune
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Comics, Editing, and Feedback
🕑 Added 2019-06-22 22:36:43 +0000 UTCFeedback is great. Taking some of the feeback from the pages shown so far let me see a few points where I was able to find some weaknesses and areas that needed improvements and make some changes to my first draft on some pages. One of the side effects is that I kind of removed one page entirely and then inserted a page. Obviously the goal is to actually complete a project: but its good to be able to catch problems with the flow and pacing of a comic before you get to the final steps, when it feels too late to fix it.
This is one of the reasons why I think thumbnails and working with a layout where you can see the whole project is kind of important. Tunnel vision can make it really hard to see your own mistakes; and, of course, feedback is important for this as well.
I'll be posting the full progress for second tier tomorrow night, want to get a few more pages sketched. And then next week I will be splitting some attention with illustrations and coms as well.
Comments
Millie Jonasen
It's looking so awesome, I'm really looking forward to it! :D
Icymasamune
The establishing shot from the opening page has been integrated into page 1, pages two and three were originally one page that has gotten stretched out to help with the setup and motivation a little more clearly, and in page four I ditched a panel that was unnecessary to give a more important panel more space.
Stelard Actek
I'm curious what changed :)
Artlover8999
This looks awesome Icy! I love it! It's astounding to see you take in and work on feedback so quickly, and so well, but I'm glad to see that you believe you're making progress!
