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January 2020 Toon Up - Hinata's Getaway
🕑 Added 2021-01-18 03:48:19 +0000 UTCAll characters depicted are consenting adults participating in consensual roleplay.
Toon Up delivery! And this one was so big I had to break it into 3 pages! Make sure you get em all!
Redid a whole comic from 2018 with some animated goodies at the end to boot! Went a bit overboard on this one, I ended up keeping elements of some original panels, reworking others, doing a whole middle-section from scratch, to go for a kind of hybrid between my old look and my current abilities. I think it comes across pretty nicely!
Enjoy!
Original comic from two years ago, for those curious to directly compare!
What do you think? Am I any better? :P
Comments
Dawho555
Yeah there are some really charming elements of the original I admittedly still really like, particularly the bra popping off. I decided to mix it up so we could have more tiddy this time, but honestly I think you're right. It's a really fun keystone of the piece that would really only improve the tone. Perhaps an alt is in order!
WarioNumberOne
It should go without saying that the art and writing are both much better overall in the new version, but I have to admit, there’s a couple minor details I thought the original comic did better. The thick cleave gag in the original looks a lot tighter and more stifling than the much thinner cloth used in the remake, and as unrealistic as it might be, I can’t help but love the exaggerated imagery of Clone!Hinata tightening the hogtie so forcefully that Hinata’s bra pops off. Even so, excellent work!
