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Some misguided comments
🕑 Added 2023-05-03 00:49:18 +0000 UTCAfter posting the first page of HomeLuz Arc 22, I wanted to share some of the comments received so far.
It's amusing that everyone sees the setup and thinks that one thing will happen (Luz will be a badass) and not suspect the reveal (it's an intro for Hunter). As a writer, you always have to look for what makes sense but is still surprising. A setup to what you think you can predict leading to something else.
Of course, that's not always the case. Especially with a mystery, you have to leave clues in the setup and some people figure it out. That's a good thing; it proves the clues you left made sense. Though, it is annoying that people will then call it "predictable," just because you properly set things up.
Still, I love these kinds of moments. Just wanted to share it with you.
Comments
HankMan
As a fellow writer, I have to admit I wouldn't have suspected the reveal if I hadn't already read the script. But I would expect some kind of twist, especially since you only posted the first page of the arc, you cheeky monkey! :P Besides, its still too early for Luz to start and open revolution.
