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My Hero Automata (Chapters 101&102)
🕑 Added 2024-12-03 08:34:02 +0000 UTCWell, didn't quite make it on the 2nd after all. Drat. Very long story short, I'm currently having fits trying to deal with a snafu regarding my health insurance for next year before the rapidly approaching deadline. I spent over an hour and a half on hold during the afternoon...and didn't actually get to speak to anyone. By bluetooth literally died before the hold ended (from full charge -_-), and I gave up.
Anyway! Enough about the reason for delay. Release time! This one is slightly shorter than normal, but not much, ending up a bit over 4,600 words. I usually shoot for 5k for the first of the two Automata updates in a month. As these two chapters are essentially transitioning between the League and a new target, along with planting a bit of foreshadowing, I ultimately cut it off where I did. Going any farther would have meant jumping into their efforts against said new target...
As always, the new bits of story are attached in various formats here, and I'll be updating the Pinned Post with the new Master Files.
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The Foreign Traveler
Merry Christmas Novus! For my present to you...all stories released this month shall be edited by yours truly! ...even though that's what I've been doing for the past few months. This time, unlike the others, I'll get it all done tonight since I "usually" pace myself in my editing. *Claps hands before rubbing them together* Let's a go! MHA Chapter 101 Page 1: Hmm, it was tempting to let Momo push her into "that pass out from overload." Adjustment: Hmm, it was tempting to let Momo push her into "the" pass out from overload "option". (Thought it made a little more sense to me. Your call Novus) Page 2: Her lover clawed at the bed, "trusting" back up just the little... Edit: "Thrusting" back up just the little... "Not", what was the best position to watch that glorious ass flex and jiggle... Page 3: Then "she to trust" their judgement and do her best to go along... Edit: Then "she trusted" their judgement and "she'd" do her best to go along... The Jaku Raid outcome that had first caused her "to lose to bubble and spiral had been...mixed. Edit: The Jaku Raid outcome that had first caused "her to lose, to bubble and spiral" had been...mixed. ...or Edit 2?: The Jaku Raid outcome that had overwhelmed her and caused her to spiral" had been...mixed. Page 4: This would take some time, and Operation Clean Slate would "been" to roll up some... Edit: This would take some time, and Operation Clean Slate would "have" to roll up some... Chapter 102 Page 5 ...actually letting her head smack on the table "as" the sheer stupidity. Edit: ...actually letting her head smack on the table "at" the sheer stupidity. "Is that aerosolized TRIGGER?" Edit: "Is that aerosolized TRIGGER?!" ...as they started computing what that could "man" Edit: ...as they started computing what that could "mean" Page 7 ...but we "cant" count on that... Edit: ...but we "can't" count on that... Wahoo! Next please!
Novus Peregrine
Thanks! I'm enjoying going completely off the canon reservation, as it were ;-). While still hitting many of the canon issues.
Jaideep
This continues to be the best MHA fic ever. I love that you took it in a completely new but logically consistent direction and its a joy to read.
