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One Piece - Halfway Broken 102-103

🕑 Added 2026-02-01 13:44:14 +0000 UTC

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The Foreign Traveler

…Whoops. Behind in doing this which I apologize for. Been completely distracted by playing RE9 but enough excuses! Here you are Novus! Edit 1: …the possibility of “at” a mutual defense… …the possibility of a mutual defense… Edit 2: …it was just “s” single note… …it was just “a” single note… Edit 3: …using one hand to her in place… …using one hand to “hold” her in place… Edit 4: … it quite needing “too”. … it quite needing “to”. Edit 5: …unexpected “an” amazing sensation… …unexpected “and” amazing sensation… Edit 6: …given how “had” he’d been forced to fall… …given how “hard” he’d been forced to fall…(?) Edit 7: …to be either thoughtful or “fully”. …to be either thoughtful or “apologetic”.(?) Edit 8: …into the “Clam” Belt… …into the “Clam” Belt… Edit 9: …which meant their Marine and WG overseers pleased with their work… …which meant their Marine and WG overseers “were” pleased with their work… Edit 10: …a promise “that” that the train… …a promise that the train…

Novus Peregrine

Yep. That's why I choose to depict the Marineford Battle as much more serious/bloody than the overall impression canon gave (at least in the anime). The shit that Whitebeard pulled SHOULD have had devastating effects on the Marine numbers. But One Piece isn't big on consequences actually sticking around. As far as Luffy needing to be more than Halfway Broken, though...keep in mind that Whitebeard was referred to as The Strongest Man in the World for a REASON. He was head and shoulders above even the other Emperors. Garp, Sengoku, Shiki and Rayleigh might be the only others who were on the same level. The top of the top of the previous generation, Rodger's generation.

Keht Jelicho

https://x.com/i/status/2020881401294487714 Ok, just came across a clip from one piece that makes it seem like white beard can just "flip the table" with entirely islands or something? If thats the scale of things later in the series, then I think Luffy's gonna need to figure a way to become more than just a halfway broken character by the time he starts facing those types of fights. Jeez. Didn't realize One Piece was capable of Dragonball levels of shenanigans like that.

Teddy

I hope save Uta and have her join the straw-hats and maybe join "Luffy's harem" (I mean they are childhood friends)

Novus Peregrine

Eh. He's done it in the past. Presumably a significant chunk of the time he worked under Tom was spent as a WG contractor. This time, at least, he's mostly only working for the Marines. Which Iceberg was presumably doing all along, since pirates and the rare merchant ship wouldn't be even close to enough to keep the massive Water 7 shipyards busy.

TheZombieDoc

Damn, WG contractor Frankie is odd to see.

Novus Peregrine

The lemons are very much a case that I'm using the timeskip period to take care of the pairing buildup, and Yamato was the focus for the first part of that. There will most likely be a drop off, where any lemons are short, for a bit now that we've had both a group lemon and her individual first time. Vivi's still only 17 and I'm unwilling to touch lemons with underaged characters, so hers won't pop up until they get at least halfway through the training trip...probably more like 75% of the way through. There will probably be one or two more with different sets of girls, but I normally keep lemons under 1,500 words. The only exception is typically if it's a 'first time' or if you're counting the date included with it. Even the previous bath lemon only ran to about 1,900, despite the number of people involved. Whereas Yamato's first time here was admittedly about 2,400.

xrunarx1

Ace or Marco killed him i thriller bark during the WG ambush i think. well someone did anyway

PlagueSpreader64

Can someone remind me what happened to black beard? I recall white beard and sengoku scoring a mutual kill. But I really can't remember how blackbeard left the story.

Camille

Thanks for the update! The weather containment facility is a very nice touch. I enjoyed seeing visible progress being made in their training. Also looking forward to the summit! Rayleigh, Jimbe, Hancock and Jozu will hopefully be impressed by the Strawhat crew's strength. Concerning the lemon with Yamato for me personally, although it was nice enough, I am not a huge fan of lemons taking up half of the chapter length in most of the recent updates. I understand that it is necessary to have each of the harem's first times described so that the romance can move forward, but it does leave me a bit frustrated with the pace of the updates as we get so see fewer other developments alongside it. Will that stay the norm once their relationship is fully established? Or will their relationship take a bit more of a backseat? I tend to read fics from other fandoms when I am in the mood for smut and generally prefer a focus on adventure when reading One Piece fanfics. With that being said, I get that this might be an unpopular opinion and that most of your readers love what you are doing. If that is the case, please carry on! I do genuinely enjoy your writing and am looking forward to the development of your story in whatever way you prefer to write it. Thanks again for the update!

Camille

Me too! I chuckled out loud for that one xD

Daemonioros

The internal monologue Perona has about Hina and Sanji genuinly made me laugh. Haven't done that in your stories since the introduction of Bunny suits in Displaced hero.

Novus Peregrine

Chapter 102 A/N 1: Honestly, I think a weather containment facility that they just REPURPOSED as a prison to hold Nami makes a lot more sense than them having a prison capable of holding like half a dozen people visibly, when they have a population of like a dozen total... A/N 2: The powers Brook develops post time skip are/were one of the inspirations for using 'spiritual energy' as the background energy of One Piece that everything is tapping into, just each manifestation in a different way. Powers like his, Perona's, and the Voodoo guy (Hawkins?) all form a coherent picture of sorts, if you work them back to first principles as it were. Then working back FORWARD, most of the other things Haki, Devil Fruit, and so on can do all kinda fit with legends and myths of what ki/chi/qi/spiritual energy/lifeforce/whateverthefuckyouwantocallit can do. I'm trying NOT do sound like a cultivator fic where Spiritual Energy comes up every third paragraph, but with characters like Perona and Brook it's a natural extension. Likewise, the bullshit Zoro bulls with his Nine Sword Style comes off very much more like a 'swordman's spirit' sort of trick rather than Haki. Add in Luffy, Kaya, and Kuina and it gets a little tough not to mention it more often than I'd really like... A/N 3: So, sexy times with Yamato! I had her lean submissive because of her choices and the culture she's adopting a somewhat mangled version of. Essentially, she leans that way because she views it as the 'ideal' for her situation. We all know she's capable of some serious self-mental-warping in her pursuit of her obsessions :-p. In this version, that obsession has merely been made milder and more reasonable by having her focus on being 'a person who fits Oden's ideals' rather than trying to be Oden himself. A bit of a healthier mindset...

Novus Peregrine

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