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Why Was There No Truck?! (Ch 14-18)

🕑 Added 2025-09-09 00:35:06 +0000 UTC

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White Neko Knight

Oh, oh please recruit Mercy! Winston and Tracer would fit in as well. Winston especially as he's more of a scientist than a fighter. Having Doomfist become something like a Kingpin would be amusing. It's the AI's from Overwatch that are the real threat from that setting. They have the ability to build rather robust armies, and even Kaiju sized mechs. Really love this story.

The Foreign Traveler

Knew it would get to this point with Alyssa sooner rather then later. Just glad she had her new friends to lean on… Anyway-! Edit 1: That…”make” an unfortunate… That…”makes” an unfortunate… Edit 2: “White” a few cyber-augmented thugs, though even there none of them were on the same level KGBeast had been. While there were a few cyber-augmented thugs, none of them were on the same level KGBeast had been.” (?)

Machina

I didn't even really know about this story until I saw the update and I just binged it. Definitely loved it, certainly think it's worth adding to the monthly possibility list.

Novus Peregrine

I'm glad you enjoyed it, now that you're back in the mood for heroes ;-). You know, I hadn't actually connected the blue skin thing :-p? I'm afraid your Blue Man Group theory doesn't hold water, since I don't remember even hearing about them until I was already well into my teens, and I've never done more than watch a youtube video of their work ;-). Hmmm, I was into DnD in my fairly early teens, so maybe Forgotten Realms Moon Elves are to blame? Or, probably more likely, Mystique from the X-men cartoons. Assuming we go with blue at all, rather than just 'exotic' in general, which I think is probably a bit more accurate... I'm absolutely angling for Barbara to defect eventually ;-). Though, since I'm writing this one a lot more by the figurative seat of my pants, it's not certain it will work out that way. I'm fairly with you on Superman. I understand why people like him, but...he's basically the ultimate Gary Stu. I don't blame his creators for that, he was one of the FIRST ever comic style heroes, which means they had ALL the mistakes to make still and hadn't needed to put any thought into balanced worlds. But the end result is that he's just...not entertaining, as far as I'm concerned. Too perfect, too OP, too plastic, really.

WhatAFungi

Whoa! I slept on this story when it first came out, I wasn’t in a super hero mood at the time. Now I’m really sad I didn’t read this sooner. This story has so much potential and I definitely think you should add it to the monthly vote. Also , this is the second story you’ve written that looks like the first love interest is a sexy, exotic, blue skinned individual. Did you have some awakening as a child relating to the blue man group? ;P I think it would be really funny, if the OC/SI takes Barbra from the bat. And then also fucks White Tiger. And this is coming from a Batman fan. Thank you for removing Superman. I hate him with a passion. Literally the worst super hero in my opinion. Great chapter!

Novus Peregrine

Ah, thanks for pointing that out. Just when I got used to the LAST UI change Patreon forced on creators, they changed it again, and now I have to figure out everything piece by piece that I used to do habitually in a new system. I seriously, seriously, loathe the fact that they change the creator UI like, twice a year, at minimum.