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Halfway Broken 70 & 71

🕑 Added 2025-07-01 15:49:43 +0000 UTC
Halfway Broken 70 & 71

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Novus Peregrine

Got these into the new Master File as well, thanks!

The Foreign Traveler

One Piece: HB Chapters 70-71 Edit 1: …belonged only to racing vessels “even” Luffy’s original world. …belonged only to racing vessels “in” Luffy’s original world. Edit 2: …she, not Luffy, who possessed the “had” highest overall bounty… …she, not Luffy, who possessed the highest overall bounty… Edit 3: …overblown flag with something “that” more properly… …overblown flag with something more properly… Edit 4: …of the new symbol “that was all that was” flying… …of the new symbol “that was” flying… Edit 5: …keep an eye on her, but accept her presence… …keep an eye on her, but “would” accept her presence… Edit 6: “The” had been merely instructed… “They” had been merely instructed…

Novus Peregrine

Glad you enjoyed it :-).

Érica C. Assunção

I fucking love it!! I'm quite curious about what they will do and how they will do it! (I have a few ideas, but you already surprised me too much for me to think I truly know what you will do next!🤣)

Novus Peregrine

I was so, sooooo tempted. As it is, I left it as it was longer than I'd originally intended out of spite :-p. Other, more reasonable, people complained though. So I eventually gave in. You're pretty close on your guess, but I won't say more than that ;-). Don't want to spoil any surprises you haven't guess yet! Kuina deserves more screen time, it's just hard to juggle everyone getting enough with the expanded crew :-). I'm glad you liked the glimpse of her viewpoint we got here!

BPellet

I prefer the simpler flag, but I also remember reading this on QQ where you got into an argument with someone who wouldn't stop crying about it and I kind of wish you kept your threat of making it even more complicated lol. Originally I thought the crew would just free all of the slaves from the auction and loot any valuables. Now it looks like they're going to kidnap some celestial dragons and relocate them, making the marines sacrifice valuable manpower to not only go save them but protect them instead of fully concentrating on the war. Also, thank you for the Kuina segment (I think I brought up being worried about her importance either here or on QQ before).

Y. B. A.

Thanks for the chapter. I'm looking forward to Luffy next bit of mischief. On an unrelated note, I have to admit that the spider motif on a bright pink background tricked me into mistaking Shakky for Momousagi lol...


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