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Before the storm

🕑 Added 2024-07-05 06:08:02 +0000 UTC

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Sarif

Outside of looking like Raikage had just been oiled up, they both look great. This is just my opinion, but I'd consider toning down some of the glossiness on their models - or at least adjusting the lighting, because Raikage especially looks like his skin is made of plastic here. The environment looks very, very nice though, so no complaints on that. Movement animation is also fine; there's not a lot of it, but what is there has anything I could point out to be wrong. So good work there. But what is up with the camera work? What's with all the swaying? It's like the camera has been taped on top of a some poor drunkard's head and he's desperately trying to keep it straight. I would not be surprised if this has caused someone to feel motion sickness. Camera movement - when done in film - should always be smooth and steady; this repetitive back 'n forth swaying is just annoying - especially when its this fast. Either slow it down by 90% or get rid of it. That's my recommendation.