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Chapter 245 - Faction Colors

🕑 Added 2025-02-17 22:09:50 +0000 UTC

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Secret Weapons

I'd actually agree with this feedback. I think the authors effort to have a few "blue screens" as possible is now kind of holding the story back a bit when it comes to events like this or even the interactions with Pylons... its very poorly described and defined, and frankly its annoying trying to parse through random comments to try and understand the full scope of it. I think a bit more clearly defined interaction with the Pylons might help clear up some of the confusion.

PWeygandt

I think something that would be helpful would be a post that listed the placements of the known factions and who lives there. I often forget who belongs to what group and what information we know about them, so a brief description of locations/factions and ppl of importance at those places would be awesome

Thomas Issa

I foresee the combined fortifications around the obelisk developing into its own massive city, a neutral meeting place and trading destination, every pylon developing ways to efficiently travel there, caravans with maintained roads, heavily armoured and enchanted boats, portals, maybe even aircraft equivalents

Buck

Won’t be long now until these disparate cities encounter each other for the first time. Large scale conflict is inevitable. Also, Chris will soon encounter others as strong or nearly as strong as he is. We will soon see how he measures up! TFTC!

Thomas Issa

Artist profession, or maybe just get the tailors and steamtress (is there a male version of that or is it just tailor) to sew the flag and also put up tapestries

Demonlord

Thanks for the nice chapter 😊 Good to see everyone taking this Obelisk challenge seriously and I can just hope that they dont start infighting before the real threat starts to show itself

AB

Great writing so far! The pace and progression is done exceptionally well something I feel too many writers lose as they get deeper into their stories. If I could make one suggestion it would be to clarify the time line a bit as to where we’re at from the tutorial ending and when the obelisk countdown falls. I believe you said 2 years from tutorial ending.


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