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Chapter 241 - Insanity

🕑 Added 2025-02-11 22:11:48 +0000 UTC

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musashi

"Miles peeked..." tftc

thomas johnson

I could not quite put my finger on what was missing. I think the stakes have been lowered. Also, the author has to show how each path forward takes longer and longer, so it truly seems like the characters earned it. I guess it is a writing trap I have seen in RPG/ system apocalypse. Usually, this is fixed by a character being whisked off to an alternative challenge, such as a dungeon/ dimension/ trial. That way, they can go back and forth between survival and "ordinary life." Good feedback.

Thomas Issa

Crafting method that involves binding with an items and activating self transformation skills and bloodline self transformation skills, so the item also transforms, but permanently transforms and improves

Clothman

If it got much more, maybe. I found as a context adding, outside view break up, add on to the chapter;it was coherent and timely. Given Miles was woven in as 'the average survivor from outside'. Pretty much as a canvas to, show the contrasts. It's not all that much. Not for the growing scene being set.

Thomas Issa

Maybe an upgrade to Chrisโ€™s endurance ability so that he transforms, getting bigger the longer he fights?

C Smith

Others will disagree. For me this is too much. Multiple miles chapters in a row, lots of talk and build up stretching the battle out. It all makes this battle kind of boring for me. Also the first part of the book was fantastic. The turtotial was great and there have been great parts since then but it's slowed down way to much. I get they are out now and wold building and char dev are great but it's just slowed down too much. If you split the difference between the tutorial pace and what is happening now I would say that would be about right. I honestly don't give two shits about miles right now, he's a unimpressive no one trying to be an assistant, if your trying to build him into a main character, okay, but it just feels forced right now. These are frustrating points for me, and my honest feedback, still like the story and subbing.

Penguin Glutton

Bte how many family members died before?

Penguin Glutton

Tftc!

Thomas Issa

Finally reached a challenge they can struggle rather than blowing out of the water, finally necessitate more preparation, military formations Also the challenge will force Chris and Austin to improve mid fight

Secret Weapons

lol someone should mention to Miles the crazy ass Fire Dragon mage, Aunt Rachael isn't even in town right now either haha

giann flroesca

I love these miles POVs. Nice way to show how the family is seen by regular folks.

Alexander C Hyde

Great chapter. Milesโ€™ outside perspective was nice.

Alexander C Hyde

Miles (peeked)peaked out over the ramparts at the duo going blow for blow that would kill everything where he came from and couldn't help but rethink his life choices.

Alexander C Hyde

It was when layering skills on top of one another that problems arose, but Austin spent a significant amount of time melding and layering skills onto his spear (so) that he could do more than two, like Chris.

Alexander C Hyde

There was a change, however, in something else and it wasn't readily apparent (to) someone looking in from the outside.

Demonlord

Thanks for the nice chapter ๐Ÿ˜Š There is only one line you shouldn't cross and it is hurting Chris's family... If that happens all restraint will fall off and it'll unleash a monster of ice that no one can stop... I think in the future it will happen but I hope not so soon

Buck

Poor Miles. His world view has been shattered by Chris and his family. ๐Ÿ˜‚


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