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WIP: Comic Commission Pg 1 & 2 - Jin on the Rocks
🕑 Added 2020-09-28 14:00:05 +0000 UTCHere are the sketchy layouts for the first 2 pages of a 3-page vore themed comic!
This features my big guy Tai (quite the popular one lately) and Jinou's (micro) OC, Jin.
Does the flow of the panels translate well? Can you tell what's happening? Feedback is always appreciated!
The final result will be a fully-rendered 3000 x 3500 pixels, per page.
I'm very excited to work further on this and look forward to having the completed full-rez pages up for you all near the end of October!
Comments
SlipperySqueaks
thanks for the feedback -- I really appreciate other people's opinions. I feel like after staring at something for x-amount of hours it can be tricky to tell if what you've got is working xD
Jinou
Dude, I can't overstate how freakin fantastic the comic already is! Seriously 11/10! <3
SiliconMage
I think the flow of the panels is some of your best work yet. Makes sense, and doesn't rush the viewer along. You always make sure there is a lot of entertaining content in the background, too. Also, the content is <3. But I'm biased. ;P
