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Memoirs 208 - All that's missing is a confessional

🕑 Added 2023-11-12 22:12:16 +0000 UTC

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uneron

Thanks for the arc, really liked this one. Stories were things always go right for the protagonist are boring, I really liked how you rocked the boat with this one. Fun to see Scarlett improvise on the fly.

Tin

I like the closing of the arc. Again I think the setup could be improved.

LNatsu

Hated all of this btw it seems like some people are trying to say that the reason the comments hating this arc stopped is because this was an actual good ending... its not they just gave up and left. This still sucks and is both bad plot progression and character "development"

DocteurNS

Well, this was a satisfying conclusion. And I believe much of the outcry about the handful of previous chapters could have stemmed from anticipation disastrous developments that did not come to pass.

FeelingsandFoibles

"But you would have hidden our appearances without reason.” Would should be wouldn't. Thanks for the chapter

iju

Scarlett is being overly confident of her abilities (and of luck).

lenkite

> It was telling her that, even though she was completely outclassed if a fight were to start here, she did stand a chance. Against the Dawnbringers ? How does she stand a chance ? She is OOM and has lost [Ittar's Genesis]. What will she even *do* ? As I see it, Scarlett should be detained and questioned. Any other choice doesn't even make sense for a Deacon of Ittar. I mean he even has the Dawnbringers on his side. The only think I can think of is the hidden skill does something truly OP in getting rid of all witnesses. Though that would mean she would need to get rid of the Baron's knights too.

Vlad the Impaler

I actually hope Rosa gets some awesome power from this ordeal so she can pull everyone's weight in the coming battles and dungeon dives because that's what she'll need to do to attone for almost ruining Scarlett's plan.

Paerofar

I agree completely. Rosa's anti-establishment tendencies are well-established and her behavior was completely in character. This arc was so awesome i became a Patreon again, and seeing Scarlett lose control and then take it back was so more satisfying than her just cruising.

Colin Love

Awesome ride

Jack

Please don't let these nerds mess with your head. This whole arc has been great!

Messe

Thank you for the chapter! This arc has been a roller-coaster for me but overall I did enjoy it. I was disappointed with how Rosa was the reason Scarlets plans went a little sideways, but she's still my favorite companion.

K A N O

Yea not a fan of this ending. There were no consequences for anyone. It was all rather disappointing and anticlimactic. If anything you could’ve had anguish actually be the one to throw the wrench in Scarlett’s plans. But instead Rosa did something dumb and nothing happened.

dmsnaz

After this arc I’m hoping Rosa is either dealt with or loses the majority of the power granted by the heart as considering betraying Red is the first thing she did with her newfound power doesn’t make it seem like she will be reliable from here in out. Overall this entire arc has been rather disappointing but I’m hoping it’s just up from here.

Rayyyn

Thanks! I've lived all the interactions with Raimind this arc

Perf

This story arc has been all around very anti-climactic for me. :(

Brieuc Sauzeat

Thanks for the chapter !


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