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Memoirs 207 - Names

🕑 Added 2023-11-09 22:33:29 +0000 UTC

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Arlen Goncalves Martins

Some repeated words here: Then they turned their head to look at Raimond, [before staring] before staring in Malachi and Rosa’s direction

uneron

Wanted to voice a different opinion for contrast: I really like this arc. The (attempted) heroic self-sacrifice and Scarletts outright hostile refusal of such is very entertaining and fitting.

Tin

So I feel the story is back on track. However, I would like to see edits/context on Rosa to subtly set up her behaviour which seems erratic to us readers. I think I can infer much here, but the setup needs work and also a little bit more here of how hopeless and in-hinged she might be.

Tin

Grammar missing I - “I do, yes.” Scarlett looked at Rosa. “…I believe you know better than most that do make contingencies where possible.””

Jack Bayless

She's a bard she's passionate and has trauma. It fits the trope she would do something drastic if she felt it would save lives

Al-Abbas Hussein

So stupid and so much unnecessary plot unbelievable I really loved rosa’s character but now she can just burn out.

Daniel McSween

I think she forced the artifact to open the teleportation portal early

KoZa

I don’t think the spell was placed on Scarlett, from what I can tell it was meant to hide the demonic element of the two and Scarlett doesn’t have anything demonic about her except by association

Colin Love

I was thinking Scarlett probably looks like her original self, I doubt that was just a simple illusory spell. Deacon Abram might have had the power to take a look under the hood so to speak, if they weren’t hiding evil underneath then it’s all good. I suppose Scarlett can say truthfully that she didn’t take Ittar’s Genesis and she did the church a solid by killing the thief. “This asshole killed my friend and I kinda blacked out while I burned him to ashes. My loyal servant took my unconscious form home, what was I to do?”. It all fit a little too neatly with my plans? “Hey well you know me and didn’t my plans involve preventing a vile from incarnating?” Things have gotten out of hand so I can’t make a real guess at what might happen. Other than the possibility Scarlett is going to have to dance between some real talk and conveniently leaving out some facts. Maybe?

Pizzatiger

I wonder what Scarlet looked like when the perception thing happend to Malachi and Rosa, perhaps it showed her original form?

Stephen

Rosa was going to do something to help the villagers or something. I don't get what she did. She teleported everyone out but doesn't seem to have done anything. Do we find out in the next chapter or did I miss something?

pelya

Scarlett officially knows all your secrets. She's not even pretending anymore.

twentytoo

As a Noble woman with her traits I'm surprised she hasn't slapped anyone in indignation yet.

I Dewa Bagus

The best chapter! Thank you

Brieuc Sauzeat

Thanks for the chapter !


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