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Memoirs 153 - Perplexing observations

🕑 Added 2023-05-28 22:05:16 +0000 UTC

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Flameruner

You are correct. Livvi was not actually present at the Proclamation, but I forgot about it when writing this part. Thanks for pointing it out!

Stephen

Logical inconsistency: Chapter 153: "She had witnessed Scarlett’s behavior during the Elysian Proclamation and when confronting Count Soames the previous day." Chapter 81: "Then you’ve also participated in the Providing Ceremony, started doing these strange things with the Guild, and I even heard you did something ridiculous at the Elysian Proclamation. Father couldn’t stop raving about it when I asked him for details" The 1st quote implies Livvi was at the Elysian Proclamation, the 2nd quote implies she was not.

Tin

Agreed. Nice to see other characters of depth who also don’t necessarily fit the mold find a connection to Scarlett.

Demerval Augusto da Cunha

ty for the chap, very good as aways. im lookin foward for the next. ty again

Colin Love

Props. The quality of your work remains as high as ever. The characters are compelling and the intricacy of your storytelling keep me deeply engaged and yet satisfied while greatly interested in what happens next. The balance of the storytelling is commendable, the new Scarlets deep interactions with characters associated with her past combined with the breakthrough with Arlene scratched a longstanding itch. While some issues are resolved accumulate new ones accumulate that are as fascinating or more so than the originals.

Lya

What's better than one competent yet amusingly different character? Two of them. And they work so well together. And they confuse everyone else. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

twentytoo

Best friends!!


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