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Memoirs 140 - Unravelling reasons

🕑 Added 2023-04-13 21:19:38 +0000 UTC

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Sebastian Lachs

The land of a marquis is called a "march".

John Brady Anderson

I really enjoy the interactions between these two, but there are a lot of interactions in this I enjoy. I kind of want to find out what other issues they needed to discuss and what is going on with Evelyn.

gostsamo

Pff, also the first sentence: > Waiting in her office in the Freybrook mansion, Scarlett gazed at the large painting that hung on the desk behind her desk. the first desk should be a wall, I think.

lenkite

Scarlett should sprinkle [Catnip] in her office.

Kyle

Isnt Scarlett's best ffriend the daughter of count Knottley? What a betreyal! Glad that old scarlett got usurped by new amy.

gostsamo

The interactions between the two always have potential for some fun. Also, some rumors about Scarlett's love life are inevitable and I'm waiting for some scandal. :) Edit suggestions: > Nothing that you need concern yourself with. missing "to", I think. > At first, she had thought it meant The Gentleman would show up any second now, but a couple of days had passed since Rosa first saw it now. "now". the second could be "without him appearing". > though Scarlett was grateful that it at least like appeared the woman was considering her own words. the like seems unnecessary. > During her fight with Gaven, the old butler had seen the flames somehow and come running through the forest. She didn’t even know how he did it, considering his age, but the man had arrived not long after she finished with Gaven. Gaven twice. > Scarlett opened a drawer on her desk and pulled out a light-green letter that had fancy livery over it. is there another meaning of livery that I'm not aware of? > but it might be hard to convince them to do certain things using only money. > “It still surprises me you could convince him just like that,” Evelyne said as she inspected the letter. convince twice. > Scarlett had had a tailor pay a visit a while back to fit new dresses specifically for this ball. These probably weren’t as expensive as some of the other pieces Scarlett already owned ... Scarlett > There are no reasons for why there would be any disputes. for there to be any disputes? > She wasn’t sure who had been the one to first approach the other party like in almost every sentence in the paragraph


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