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"The Scales of Time": Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2024-06-23 12:00:07 +0000 UTC

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BS Writer

Thank you. That was what I was hoping to achieve. I also thought it was important to give Julie another moment where she was clearly able to be the better person to make Vivian’s downfall even more her fault.

Wilbo

Another awesome chapter in a wonderful story. You have done a great job creating depth with these characters. Vivian is obviously a villain, but she is also a victim of her circumstances. She's not just mean or evil for no reason. Vivian has been raised to see the world as a zero-sum game, a struggle for power with winners and losers. Which has a decent amount of truth to it considering the nature of the coven. She also doesn't hate or bully Julie for no reason or because she is just mean. Vivian has been raised her whole life with the mission of defeating Julie and has done everything she can to tear Julie down to help achieve that goal. You've taken the classic mean girl bully trope and built fleshed out characters with believable motivations. I can't wait for the next part.


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