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Some DanCre re-design

🕑 Added 2020-06-30 08:44:46 +0000 UTC

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Thanks! May I know where you're going to use this design? It's okay if it's only for personal use, and credit me if you need to publish your personal work on social media.

I like this. Is it okay if I use this redesign?

Wow thanks again for the comment! I guess I'm used to be old school and worry about the printing result too much XD It's a relieve to know people are okay with it. If one scene contains more depth in the background (forest, nature, castle, etc..) , my messiness linework will really struggle to make it readable, or even accomplish it, so I want to learn how to draw by 100% opacity black, or some colors closed to it, so I can simplify everything in pure black/white, and less grey tone means less object to deal with. 🤔

Ahh clarity and readability are the goals of every serious artist, so I feel youX) Personally I think your smut scenes are very iconic as it's tied to your style of storytelling, and I didn't have any issue following the panel sequences. So I think your flow is fine. I think you simplifying their designs while making them very recognisable would definitely help in decluttering your pages. I'm excited to see your next steps (I just love your analyses^_^).

Woah you're too kind XD I'll add some smut to the practice!

Haha Thanks XD I often lost the focus when stretching smut scene to, like, all fanbook. Only 2-3 pages are probably fine and a full story still requires some other scenarios. In the end it's inevitable to learn to ink everything I guess😅