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Mother's Time Ch 2 (One Piece)
🕑 Added 2025-05-19 03:55:33 +0000 UTCFinally finished! Said it would be probably done yesterday, but its 5k words longer instead :D
HW won the poll, but 45/55 isn't bad at all. I'd like to schedule HL sometime soon!
Summary: After Robin and Olvia's curiosity is piqued, Luffy explains everything--How Lady Toki came aboard their vessel in the first place... and how a strange situation landed him in bed with both Hiyori and Toki at the same time!
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Next time should be Nami/Bellemere/Nojiko!
A/N: Pretty happy with how this one turned out. What are your thoughts on Toki? Any smut with her, especially with this plot line, kind of makes her out to be disloyal to her husband(Which sucks, cause I do like Oden and it's very contrary to her character) BUT here we are lol. I’m not against ‘cuckold’ stuff so long as it's Netori(Protag steals another's wife) But I hesitate to lean into that without getting an idea how you guys feel about it, especially in a fic where it isn’t the focus. That’s why there is very little mention of Oden at all.
Having said that… Here’s a fun thought that occurred to me while writing this: So the Wiki claims that Toki is 6’3” or 190 cms tall. Oden on the other hand is 12’6” or 382 cm tall, DOUBLE her size. Assuming he’s even slightly proportional I can’t even imagine the size his ‘manhood’ would be. But because this is smut obviously our protagonist has to be bigger right? So either Luffy’s ‘manhood’ is like 30% of his body mass, or Oden’s is smaller than his own pinky finger. I know its smut AND its One Piece (Not even the most ridiculous example in OP; think Shirahoshi’s parents) BUT even so, I hesitated to write any classic, ‘he’s so much bigger than my husband’ etc, etc.
I wonder if the magic that shrunk Enma for Zoro to handle also works for Oden’s ‘other sword’? 🤔
Comments
Jonathan Santiago
Great chapter, can not wait for the next one XD
Kuuga
Can't wait for the next one with nami nojiko and bellemere
