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Fate Gamer Night - Chapter 49 & 50

🕑 Added 2019-12-02 20:31:52 +0000 UTC

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IgnisHeart

I don’t think it a lack of ideas so much as getting the the last few chapters to flow together properly. Though that may be my distaste of RinxWaver showing.

Eternity Smut

If you ever run out of ideas somebody in QQ posted a story 'bout RinxWaver. ;)

IgnisHeart

We eagerly await it

IchaIchaSennin

I'll have something to show soon, one way or another.

jmspikey

On one hand i would prefer he put out something that he is confident in and not feel pressured to update but on the other hand if it really is giving him so much trouble then an outsiders opinion might be helpful

IgnisHeart

I second this.

lostguy12

would it be possible to get at least a small beta of it this week, maybe we could give you some feedback on it?

jmspikey

Uninspired ? you have done a lot with a concept most folks would have just written 1 to 2 chapters with and have been done with it including going for multiple endings at that.

IchaIchaSennin

It's the flow, actually. It just feels clunky and uninspired. And of course the more I try to power through the worse it gets.

IgnisHeart

Oof, that sucks. Writers block is never fun. Is it just the chapters ending or the content in the middle?

IchaIchaSennin

I ran face first into a writer's block in regards to The Fall. I finding my way around it but it ain't easy.

jmspikey

As much as I don't like sounding like an inpatient fellow it has been some time since The Fall received an update so I am curious on the situation with it.

2Lazy2Name

Was just re-reading this, and I realized that Sakura's hair is almost entirely white despite her being out in public. That's... *very* bad, isn't it? Man, every chapter, it just seems like more problems are waiting to pile onto Shirou's plate. As for you, Icha, glad to hear your health is back. We all hope it sticks around for a very long time, and wish you well this holiday season.

SpectralTime

...On the one hand, I'm left panting for more... but on the other hand, those were both very rad chapters, and I find I can't complain about a double helping of double-stuffing. Thanks. Glad your health is improving.

foza

Soul society could certainly spare another member for the ritual.


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