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The Separate Plot For The Villain Exclusive Audio
🕑 Added 2024-11-15 08:18:56 +0000 UTCI made two completely different plots for the same audio because I didn't know how I wanted to pursue the idea of a villain who was also the love interest. Here's how it turned out. It's in point form, because I write ideas in point form.
PLOT 1 - The one I used for the exclusive
Antagonist is in love with Y/N. Y/N Is a part of a special forces or government position set out to destroy antagonist.
Y/N shows up at antagonist lair, talks about how antagonist wanted them there, antagonist is astonished and fawns over Y/N until they bring up antagonist's plans and their bounty. This sobers antagonist up.
"Everything I do, I do for you" mindset.
Antagonist, less fortunate, is trying to dismantle their government so that Y/N can be with them and potentially rule by their side.
Yandere-esque mindset.
Y/N talks about how they could never love antagonist, antagonist goes off on a rant, they end up giving themselves for Y/N's affection/attention.
OR
Antagonist describes a life with Y/N where she is devoted to them and they rule together.
She ends up pledging her life to Y/N
TBC?
PLOT 2 - The One I Didn't Use
Y/N is about to kill antagonist after a massive fight. Antagonist tries desperately to talk to Y/N with her final breaths/moments.
"Everything I did, I did for you" mindset again.
Talks about how much she loves/admires Y/N.
Y/N is responding to a governor that is corrupt. Antagonist alludes to this, telling Y/N about the lies and secrecy they don't know about. It spreads doubt in Y/N's mind about antagonist actually being the bad guy. It's a lot to think about.
Antagonist ends up stalling off, either dying or passing out- depending on this being TBC or not.
annndd that's it. I think the first plot was more of a fully fledged idea and relied less on important details and monologuing. In retrospect, I wish I made the character in the exclusive more lovestruck. Almost as if they were willing to do anything to get you because they went as far as to tear apart the city sorta thing. I do like the "last words" sort of thing, but it requires a lot of prologue that is hard to do in a 10-20 minute audio and I really didn't want to make this an eight part series. It is also really hard to edit if I wanted it to be immersive. It's crazy how that final audio was my third redo of trying to sit down and record it.
Hope this is a funny little thing to look at. I already have an idea of what I'm going to do for my next upload, which will hopefully be tomorrow. It was going to be tonight but I am an eepy girl who needs rest rn.
Comments
caseyl
ik it’s more work, and the end of the exclusive audio felt closer to the type of character you more desired, i’d say try it once more? with it pre-alluding to a corrupt gov. and more concerned on watching over due to y/n being in a “good honorable position but unaware about the corrupt corp” I say even if it’s a re-up load, any audio of yours is good lol so we will listen to it regardless fr. though I do like the slow burn vibe where she slowly reveals more and more her feelings until the last bit where she’s almost vulnerable like in ur audio. i’m ranting, but tryna think it out for u cause no one else commented lol.. the second audio could be y/n is sent to the lair to capture/kill villain but maybe the first apt was bugged, the evil corp sent y/n into a trap to kill both characters? the villain shows the truth by saving y/n??? it could be a plot twist tbh and a romantic one too. the fawning over injuries and first appearance can remain. idk girl I hope this at least inspires some thought for u. keep up the amazing work 🥰💕 (also kinda love the sneak peak of drafts u have, love ur storytelling always)
