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Death After Death 161-162

🕑 Added 2024-10-21 13:57:01 +0000 UTC

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_Sky_

Yo know what... I can totally see him having an arc where he is teaching mathematics or basic physics to some noble brat, and ends up being considered a Newton of their age. (Considering they are on kinda Medieval level)

GrinBean

Now he only needs to spend rest of the loop designing lifting mechanism for a platform to move his horse down the well with him, then die without actually building it. Next level he'll discover his work kicked off industrial revolution/renessaince era inventions and resulted into major chage XD

GrinBean

TYFTC

DeadSlime

Always the little details that differentiate a good story to a great story!

_Sky_

I love how he bought a Horse only to remember he has to pass through a well to get to next level. Kinda stupid mistake, but very very relatable one. Love it. Makes MC feel alive.

D. Winchester

Thats a good point, and probably a plot hole. I should address in the rewrite. Thanks for point this out.

DeadSlime

I’m kinda of surprised Simon didn’t ask Ethena about the Unspoken. As they seem like a large threat to Simon even if he learns more about magic. Plus their name is a give way that they are specialised in hunting magic users. Unspoken like blocking spoken words of power. Which probably block the link between the transfer of life force and the words themselves.

D. Winchester

Time loop consequences engaged!

Antoine De l'Epine

Oof, wonder how little aaric will react to that


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