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A Flurry of Motion that Changes Nothing

🕑 Added 2023-07-14 20:09:49 +0000 UTC

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Centuri

Personally I feel the story has progressed exactly as it should have and I struggle to see how else it would have (aside from another golemancers perspective). The recent heroes chapter when they see the map and realise exactly how desperate their situation is after everything that’s happened to them was the catharsis needed to justify the golemancers loses. It’s as if the lines spoken by the golemancer at the end of chapter 05 are finally coming true. (The core world universe you’ve made already feels like it has so many possibilities and I look forward to reading them all if you ever get around to writing them.)

D. Winchester

Nice! Golemancer has a grand total of two patrons, so by all means hop on discord sometime and tell me what you like and what you don't. I plan on doing an extensive rewrite to the early part to make it feel less like the Golemancer is losing because it's a CONSTANT complaint. (You'll also be pleased to know that I have no less than 3 great ideas for future books in the core world books: a straight Litrpg progression, a crafting focused story, and a kingdom builder, but any/all of those would be 2024 at the earliest)

Centuri

Glad to hear there’s interest in golemancer it’s what brought me to your patron in the first place. I wish you luck on getting it published, if that’s what you want to do with it. Also started reading Tenebroum recently and I’m enjoying the story. I look forward to when I’m paying for the advanced chapters. 😁


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