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Tenebroum 19-20

🕑 Added 2022-11-28 14:58:00 +0000 UTC

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D. Winchester

It's too late for you. The swamp's influence is subtle but far reaching and every day it learns more about the world and how best to exploit it to further its own plans... You and I are just pawns in its schemes, just like the goblins... I'm glad you enjoyed it though. The goblins play an important role for the next few chapters as our scope expands a little further.

jordan renz

I'm really greatly enjoying your work so far, I couldn't read this yesterday since I didn't have work, but I'm almost okay with being made to wait to indulge in your work. Don't was to be influenced too much by the swamp now do I?

D. Winchester

That should have read 'questionable value,' I have amended the line to read "Neither Lord had bothered to build roads to them because of their terrible soil and questionable value. Besides that, they were well known to be infested with goblins and other monsters." thank you for finding the issue! You have just improved the great work of the swamp.

Kermit The Frog

Great chapters, but tenth paragraph from the bottom has a weird sentence, about the hills where the sentence goes " because of their terrible soil and questionable,". Wondering if there is a missing word or something. Can't wait for more!


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