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Hefty Consequences 3 of 4

🕑 Added 2021-03-11 20:39:13 +0000 UTC

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Molly Coddles

Laurie's definitely got a big role in the final chapter!

Matt O

Another great piece - maybe it's my own preoccupations, I hope there's a bit more Laurie in the next one, but this is fantastic!

Molly Coddles

Thanks so much! Glad you liked the little details; I'm always proud of those XD

Molly Coddles

I think you'll like the next one! It's a little less down.

miki

I know this may not be everybody's cup of tea, but god damn does this part really work. I mentioned in the last part how much Alice and Jen's reactions to their sudden problems were really tracking along as an interesting detail, with Jen's part-denial, part-apathy and Alice's self-awareness and addiction continues. Jesse here is an excellent addition, and she does a great job trying to see how even despite how deliriously obese Alice is, she now draws pitty more than mockery. Her struggles with the stairs is really interesting too, something which is quite standard for the Alice saga, but here hints at much darker undertones. The mention of Nurse Hopkins coming back in the middle too was a really smart addition too, seeing how she's basically given up on trying to save our ill-fated fatsos. Laurie was a classic here too, and I look forward to hopefully seeing more of her predicament next part. Her hedonism is amazing, and showing how she's taken the lead and her greed and gluttony way exceeds what Frank and Abida want is a cool turn. This is just a really great foray into a new field of your writing we've not really seen in detail, and to be honest, I think it's a really great showcase of that. Your work as a writer is, and continues to be, excellent.