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🕑 Added 2020-10-06 02:41:19 +0000 UTCCraig is ready to spend a romantic evening with her ever-expanding girlfriend Jen, but something about tonight reminds me of the first time that he met Jen. She was, of course, much thinner back then but she still had a rear porch that had awesome potential for growth...
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Molly Coddles
Thanks so much! Glad you're appreciating Jen too now XD
miki
I feel like maybe I was sleeping on Jen a few parts before, but damn I don't know if I will after this one! Craig is quite a great way to go for a POV about Jen's bootylicious trials and tribulations, and he certainly lives up to it here. Showcasing Jen's sloth was done excellently here, and the flashback was an excellent way to show progression and the 'growth' of Jen's character. All the little elements shined too, be it the greasy meals placed about, the lovely clothing touches, and Jen's body almost being too fat to even handle pleasure! Very lovely addition. Bravo.
Molly Coddles
Glad you liked it! :D
Phat94
Damn, that has to be my favourite chapter in a while! I couldn't believe how burpy Jen got which I tremendously appreciate, and shoving one's face into her colossal caboose is the dream. The flashback was unexpectedly sweet as well. Personally, I'd have loved if Jen did "blow" in the way you suggested, but I'm glad it was at least teased. More like this, please!!!! Thank you for sharing!