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The Queen Deposed (2 of 2)
🕑 Added 2023-12-06 05:08:14 +0000 UTCHere's a fun little what-if! What if, back when Jen first started to have doubts about Laurie's plan to fatten up Alice, Laurie hadn't been able to convince Jen not to spill the beans? What if Jen told Alice everything? What if Laurie became a pariah around the school for her evil plan? What if Alice then managed to start slimming down? And what if, most of all, Laurie's slide into depression as an outsider led her to continue gaining?
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Molly Coddles
Oh, yeah, I wouldn't have much interest in writing about anyone's weight loss! XD
Molly Coddles
Thanks, glad you like it! I'm not much into slob stuff on its own, but I think sometimes it's a great way to showcase how extreme a character's dedication to gluttony has become, and that can be fun :)
kisbie
Wasn't sure I would enjoy this so much, but thankfully Alice and Jen's weight-loss wasn't a major part of the story. Mostly, it was a lovely new take on how Laurie might have become the goddess of gluttony we all know her to be. Very nice.
miki
What a lovely conclusion to a surprising alternative story/what-if. While I'm definitely a Fat Alice simp, hard not to appreciate Laurie here, both her resigned defeat in Part One, and her shameless hedonism in here. I've always liked mobility stuff, but some of the segments in this one are top-notch, everything from comparing her to other struggling students with the elevator to her disability status in school and of course that test scene. Even the more slobby stuff that I didn't *think* I was into was a real turn-on, burps, farts, and sloppy stuff is something I now know I have a spot for! Despite being a what-if, this is a great addition to the Alice universe, with a couple of ideas that almost feel like they could be right at home in the main story. A real treat.
