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Self-indulgent Whining!

🕑 Added 2023-07-28 17:26:32 +0000 UTC

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Molly Coddles

thank you so much, Joe! So fun to look back on that and think about how far the girls have come since then XD

Joe

I know this old but there are so many great mollycoddles story moments, one that stands out to me as one of the hottest but also arguably the big turning point/most important paragraph for me in the Alice story: “Can you imagine it, Jen? Our fat little piggy here, even fatter,” she laughed, patting Alice’s big bouncy belly. Laurie picked up another cookie and crammed it into her mouth. No reason to hold back now. If Alice kept eating like she had tonight, she’d be a blimp in no time. And the fatter Alice was, the thinner she would look. She imagined what Alice would look like when they were done with her – an enormous globe of a girl. Perhaps that loser boyfriend of hers could roll her to school." Laurie has just begun her quest to fatten Alice but still can't help but cram another cookie into her greedy mouth, as there is "no reason to hold back now." Her restraint has gone out the window and the foreshadowing she will balloon up insanely is just brilliant. You are a truly incredible writer!

Molly Coddles

Thanks Dan that's extremely kind of you to say... and tbh it does really help me feel better :)

Dan

OK, real-world flex: I worked as a high-level editor for national publications for about 15 years of my career; I have also written multiple books. I still write for a living, and I have never stopped editing copy. I have seen effortlessly brilliant prose from naturally gifted people, and I have seen some hot garbage that should never have been submitted by someone calling themselves a professional. Trust me when I say this: You are not the latter. You are a real writer.

Molly Coddles

Thank you Hal, that means so much to hear! <3 I am a huge fan of your work and nothing makes me happier than to think I might have played a little role in your own decision to start down this path :D

Halrion

So many moments. Love the Heather stories, and the "escape from fat camp" bits in early Alice, especially her reaction when she realises Tyler has come to save her. But the one I always return to is Laurie’s date with Frank in Alice 22. From Jen helping her bossy bestie squeeze her belly into her girdle, to Laurie's treatment of Frank—haughty and disdainful on the surface, but hungry and maybe, just maybe a little self-conscious beneath. The dynamic between them is beautiful. Not to mention hot. I remember gripping the carpet with my toes when Laurie, stuffed up to her eyeballs and writhing with indigestion, leans forward to lick cheesecake from Frank’s finger 🥵 Sorry to hear about the setbacks. Whatever happens you are an amazing writer. Your stories have brought so much joy, excitement and laughter into my life over the years, and of course inspired my own tubby triumvirate. I wouldn’t be doing something I love and care about - writing my own stories here - if it wasn’t for you, and I'm eternally grateful. Never give up, and keep being you. Besides, I disagree: self-indulgent whining is sexy. Just ask pretty much any of my characters! 😄 Love, hugs and a huge slice of cheesecake 🍰 Hal