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Weight Training 4: Electric Boogalour (2 of 2)
🕑 Added 2022-11-18 03:00:02 +0000 UTCLaurie is still gaining, with help from her trio of lovers Tina, Frank, and Abida. And she's really gaining! Laurie is reaching ridiculous sizes and her lovers are determined to keep her fed and happy no matter what. But they're going to have to find some creative ways to keep this hungry queen satiated!
So this concludes this fun little what-if story! This story was a little different from my usual fare -- muscles are a new arena for me! XD -- and the commissioner asked that I throw it open to reader opinion. So tell me, what do you readers think about Laurie's personal fatness trainer? How do we feel about Laurie and Tina's adventures? What worked and what didn't? Feel free to leave any feedback below!
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Molly Coddles
Thank you! :)
Arragon
You did an amazing job with Tina especially since FMG is far from your usual writing style.
Molly Coddles
Glad you liked it! :) I'm sure Laurie would probably eventually bring in more feeders... can't have too many of those XP
kisbie
I really enjoyed it, Molly. But then, you wrote it, so I would. :) This felt like a natural extension of the Aliceverse, even considering the outlandishness of this last chapter. The real Laurie probably doesn't have limits on how monumentally, gigantically fat she dreams of being, so it's fun to see these alternate destinations for her. It's like a glimpse into her own personal fantasies. Tina's motivations for feeding and fattening Laurie are a subtle variance on Frank's and Abida's. She fitted into their arrangement so neatly that it will perhaps throw me to realise she's not there in the main narrative. The only thing that doesn't quite ring true is Laurie's personal feeding circle stopping at just three people. xD She is now so much 'id' that she wouldn't leave it there! Oh, and giant fat nipple sex FTW! <3
