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VN update and Favorite Character thus far?
🕑 Added 2020-12-12 20:53:25 +0000 UTCUnfortunately, I couldn't get the game finished by this week once again (The amount of art I have to do for it is just wow...), aside from other technical difficulties, it is slowly shaping up into a final product worthy of being shown.
HOWEVER! I posted an alpha version of the first episode a while ago, which features the whole story. I have since gotten some feedback and will change some things in the script accordingly to improve the game and the story, but I would still like to hear more of your guy's feedback on it.
Seriously, every little bit of opinion and feedback matters, so don't be shy.
In the meanwhile, for the final release, I'm going to extend the ending, which felt a little rushed and other small, minor things throughout the story. Unfortunately, one thing I didn't get to know is whom is everyone's favorite characters and who could use a little more love in the story. I can think of a couple of cards who didn't get enough love in the plot and I'll probably be adding some extra things, but I would like to hear from YOU as well!
Who's your favorite character and who would you like to see more of?
From left to right, we have Rob, Lee, Cal, JJ, Jane, Matthew, Coach, and Edward. All of whom are just waiting to be chosen (either by content or by looks)!
And to not leave the week without any meaningful update, I've worked on a new title screen (the one in the alpha version is a placeholder), here's how its looking.
I do feel that it's a bit too on the nose as it is, and am planning to add the remainder of the cast there. Rob's friends beside him, and Jane on the middle row beside Matthew.
That should make things work out a bit better, I'd hope
Once again, sorry I have to delay this one more time, hopefully for the last time, since I do want this thing to be completed before Christmas, Do let me know what other kinds of content you think I could be posting here as part of weekly updates, I'm curious to see what other sort of thing you all would be interested in seeing :)
Comments
Shogun's Slave
(Not saying that you should expand their story, but helping you to develop Rob, imagine how much would the conflict between scott and Mathew would help Rob to understand matthew
Shogun's Slave
I feel that, before using the old characters inside the plot you should honred them by giving them a proper ending, I say this because I felt like golden week part 7 only focused in Derek and scott, rather than the others
Douglas Kim
Seems to be a thing with equines XP
UrsusArctos
Robert, because he has a great voice and a big... ...heart
