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Golden Week Part V outlines (!!spoilers!!)
🕑 Added 2015-11-30 14:03:47 +0000 UTC Yes! It's time to begin the 5th chapter (out of seven) on the Golden Week saga.This method I somewhat used for the 3rd and 4th part, but it was somewhat inacurate, because I changed things (a lot) with time, but having a initial outline really helps, so I decided to apply it to this part as well, but also use the page scripts, which resembles more closely the process behind more famous comics, but which is also way more time consuming.
Here is an exerpt of the first and second pages and the general outlines for the beginning of the fifth part.
In case it wasn't clear enough, !!!SPOILER ALERT!!!
PART V SCRIPT AND PLANNING
Initial planning: November, 2015
GENERAL OUTLINES
Maria encourages Derek to be true to himself and be with Scott. (3-4 pages)
Scott tries to evade Tom's questioning on why he's being so distant and Jane's attempts to start a conversation. (4-6 pages)
Derek decides to call Scott and set up another meeting. (2-3 pages)
PAGE 1
Zoom out from a mirror being held by Maria, showing Derek with his hair and mane trimmed. Derek exclaims surprise about it.
PAGE 2
Maria tells Derek about how he should take better care of his appearance, but assures him that Scott will approve of his new look. Derek thanks Maria for encouraging him to take a step forward in his relationship with Scott despite Edward's protests.
