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Early 'Transporter Paradox' video script.
🕑 Added 2016-03-15 17:30:12 +0000 UTC Here's how things looked back in early December.Comments
Dave Land
This is a great perk for your Patreon supporters. Thank you. And at the risk of coming over churlish, I was surprised to see "mersy" and "safeist" misspellings in your draft. But they're drafts. That's what they're for. So shut up, Dave, and be appreciative for a look behind the curtain.
Shaun Brown
In the original post, i couldn't make out what the intermediary step is between drafts -- sorry if I missed it. after Grey marks up (via pencil) in goodreads, does he incorporate the changes back into the text-form (via editorial or whatev)? ...and then pencil-edit; and then incorporate changes into text-form; and then pencil-edit; etc. etc? I ask because it seems like this is relatively clean for how many times he re-writes/iterates.
ChalkyChalkson
It was nice to read! Espy the two different versions in comparison (and the footnote :P )
PotatoGod_777
Not sure if this is the first time you've posted a script(new to patreon) but this an interesting insight to your process.
CGP Grey
You and me both.
Charles Anderson
I just read this in "CGP Grey" voice.
