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SSD 4.44 - Into the Woods

🕑 Added 2023-06-28 21:40:32 +0000 UTC

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bbk

Non-euclidean geometry lets go! (One of my favorite thing in video games. would so over use it if I was Caden) They don't know what crysteal is? Did our boy just invent a new magical material? Yeah whatever you want people are gone know this dungeon is special. I said it probably before but I'll say it again, you are making my favorite dungeon core story. The very simple but important and different thing that you do, is making your dungeon artistic! Yeah other stories have dungeon that are impressive and grandiose but yours is beautiful. It is a pleasure to simply discover with your characters all the new surprises and details hidden in it. Like you are adventuring yourself.

Foxmoor Fiction

Glad you liked it, and I have been planning the wandering woods for ages. One of the first dungeon areas I came up with. There is a still a lot more waiting in the woods.

Novel Cat

Instead of birds, we have flying fish in a forest. Love it. Also love the unique loot drops, beautiful dungeon floors, and interesting surprises. Loved the winding tunnel of roots and how the weeping willow created a curtain to really bring the "entrance" factor into play lol. Can't deny the floor did seem a bit like a downgrade compared to the upper floors, cuz there didn't seem to be a lot going on when compared to the intricate designs of environment and fauna as is shown in the upper floors. Maybe it's cuz C's still absorbing all that info? Or maybe there's still more to be seen later on? I do agree that if we could've seen some random fauna slipping through the woods and bushes it would've bin a bit different, and more real, but that's just my opinion lol. A simple of example(s) could've bin a herd of deer, or even a stag, far off into the woods barely seen through the trees (Or seen on a ridge further up on the forest. {Heck, even having deer (and some predators) that live on the branches of trees would be interesting lol.}). The bonus to seeing random creatures (probably herbivorous) in the woods would be that entering the woods would= leaving the safe path. And the deeper you go, the more likely you'd be to meet a roaming Threat to your life lol. Did you know that deer can eat meat too? They just usually go for the easy food for safety (and possibly nurturing) reasons lol. Also seeing flashes of Something in the leaves could be an interesting foreshadowing in my personal opinion lol. Though, in retrospect, the large school of fish swarming out of the canopy Does fit in with the danger level of lower floors lol. It's just a different Kind of dangerous. I also agree that him outing himself isn't really a smart play. Especially after the method that he entered this world... Not that long ago... Yeah I get feeling safe and comfy after escaping but he Seriously Doesn't Know what all's out there much less the kinds of people/organizations/Kingdoms he had to Deal with... Really hope Z's able to talk some sense/warn him properly about the world around him... Especially since we All Know how Dangerous us regular humans can be Without magic at our disposal😅. 👀🙃 But maybe that's just me being a bit of a pessimist.😅 👀😊 E's practically the exact Opposite of C's optimism so I'm looking forward to see his thoughts when he emerges from his enlightenment from C's knowledge base lol. The fact that this world exists right Next to a black hole it's ALL the more reason to continuously amp up one's protection measures just in case imho lol. But that's just me 😁😊. Still hate G btw. Can't say he deserves much of anything but I'll only get angry again if I dig deeper so I'm stopping here on That subject lol. Love the chapter as always! 😁 Thanks for the chap! 😊

Zarik0

That why i said eventually he can do that, but now? and when he will know what the Adar know? just no way, he atleast for a period of time work in the different direction (and how Adar do thing) and stay hidden, it will be totally irresponsible and thougless of him if he start show/expose himself before doing a real pondering of his situation and how the world is and the infos he get and the still unknow around and what impact he will have for him and for others (negative and positive one)

fity0208

I agree on the long road, for tutorial theme that mc is running a "keep your eyes open" room feels better than just "keep looking at the floor" The dungeon talking while unique it still fit the lore, I recall that while only the adar speak with dungeons it's common knowledge that they have some level of intelligence, since everyone sees MC as a long forgotten ancient dungeon they might say that it developed an ego over millions of years

Zarik0

Thank for the chapter, the different Shards of MC have really do a insane amount of work in the background with the number of floors and stuff they have build :) Whole long road with only bad traps seem very lackluster, some mini useless low level monster (mouse/rat) appearing here and here seem way better as they need to pay attention to them too when 'training' for trap but even if missed these monster will do basically nothing to them ''What the hell would we do if the dungeon refuses to be quiet? If it wants to talk to everyone?'' Well i will be a bit dissapointed personally if this goes like that as i don't like it in dungeon storie and see no reason for these MC doing that basically all time (or veyr wobbly reason), but okay... BUT if that happen it need to be WAY way later, no way MC start exposing himself to everyone and to so much unknow (and danger) to him when he know jack shit about the world and the danger of it and how things are and happen and after his experience that he get with Gram at the beginning......, it will be much later after he really ponder at lenght a choice like that and lot of multiple others things and repercussion of it and get all the info out of the Adar and advice of them as it not impact only him but a lot of things for other (dungeon/whole adar race and etc), also he have zero hurry and need to do something like that, prudence and doing thing slowly is the obvious thing to do as he explore and learn of this world, and accept the statue qo untill know better and help the Adar at first do things like they have done for millenia as soon as he learn of it (because obviously reason they do thing slike that and need to assert and analize things first before moving)

Foxmoor Fiction

My pleasure

Crazy Abe

Thank you for the chapter!


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