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SSD 4.43 - Rainbow Mirage

🕑 Added 2023-06-20 19:22:31 +0000 UTC

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bbk

Caden absolutely is an artist and I'm sure his art will move the world. Also Zidaun's team are such professionals, able to limit themselves to match the strength of certain levels.

Novel Cat

I really like this story so thank you for another chapter 😁😊💖. And seriously, thank you for the update on what's all going on with Caden and Exsan. Bin wondering what all's going on in there, and a few other things, while still looking forward to their official meeting lol. So, thank you again for the update. 😊 LOVED the imagery in both the dungeon core pov and the boss room pov. Would also love to see some more of those ai generated pics to see some concepts on it but no rush lol. Also wanna say that this chap was delicious as always but I'm still antsy for the Feast I call Caden meeting Z and actually having a full convo 😁😌. 😏 Plus the realizations that'll come from it all lol. I Know I'll hafta wait for everyone to finish what they're doing, and I'm more than Willing to wait, but I can't deny I'm a bit greedy for this delicacy lol. Btw, auto correct struck in= "The rainbow mirage came forward us..." Vs toward us. Auto correct is annoying so I don't mind catching it slipping lol. I'm off to read your other story OTH so thank your again for updating this story! 😁😊💖😊💖

Zarik0

I hope the boss and monster after the first few floors will stop having simple/same attack pattern and etc and become more like real living being how they react and act in fight, or it will become a real disservice to people who 'train' and get accustomed to things like that For the secret out, honestly i hope it will become a plop and don't do much (or be resolved fast and locked out), i don't think we need more plot line taking place for the story with already all what it have, that it have to be managed/show by the story and the worldbuilding in it who is already very interesting, the Adar installment and their society (the few peep about their class and role in their group show a lot need to be show and its very interesting :), the geopolitic and merchand and city/country/people around the dungeon and the interaction/link/installation they will get into the dungeon and with Adar, the building of the dungeon, dual soul and coexistence of the dungeon, the long plot of the cycle of destruction of civ and all the mystery/strange of the world, the long plot of the big (antagonism?) sorcerer (Gram?) who is coming/traveling with the guy dungeon linked Feel you have already way to much material and things you can use and deepen and show us before it goes everywhere in a mess and start to be with part superficially done or jumped over :P Really can't want for this Zidaun/Callum meeting :))) Both story in the patreon are so good, having reading them in batch as i come on the patreon every few month (limited in money) is a bliss each time, i want more chapter already.... :PP


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