RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 87 HD + 94-95 remade !
🕑 Added 2021-04-13 01:49:35 +0000 UTCFirst off, the HD page :
The before after folder : https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1rqvbs0AhHkXSvBJQgKu35UspVeCur6CM?usp=sharing
The just after folder : https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1axdXteUc7pbZZD6PljuDC7JINqTEkRoV?usp=sharing
The remade pages have seen few changes really worth talking about. they're also relatively unimpressive pages all in all and have remained mostly the same. Still ! Let's get into it !
I wanted to give a different impression in 94 because I thought the sploojshot felt over and done with kinda quick. So the first panel bleeds into the second one to make the time spent seeeeeeeeem less clear cut. Which is literally true since the panel itself is less clear cut. Plus anothe shot of the splooj pool, just for the sake of slowing the pace down. I've also removed the dialogue altogether because it never goes anywhere for one, looked awful for two and I just wanted the moment to not be undercut so soon for three. So Zee stays silent !
Until 95 that is, where the dialogue is changed again and is more in continuation with the way they were talking before, which makes Larsen's silence sound like the scene is shifting tone more clearly that it was with the old Zee dialogue. Otherwise, all the changes are obvious enough to not warrant detailing. Cos yaknow. You can just look. The head is turned differently. That's it. that's the change.
Anyway, that's about it. I'll probably post the suggestion call tomorrow so you can already prepare whatever awfully filthy suggestion you would have me draw !
Comments
RodVonBoche
Yeah I thnk Zee's face looks derpy there. I probably will rework it
Jarrod
The panel blend on page 94 is an interesting choice. Don't think I would've noticed it had you not pointed it out. I don't know if it adds much, but it definitely doesn't take away from anything. And added splooj panels is never a bad thing, in my humble opinion. The head angle shifts on both pages was a good choice and they make the characters look more consistent with the rest of the comic. I will say Zee's phantom eye in the bottom corner of page 95 did make me chuckle though. Just amused me. Not sure why.
Eldkatten
Yeay for sploj! ✨
Diego P
Dawwww!
tegirvaru
cumming on timing while riding on top us the hottest/satisfying thing to me ever. this page totally captures that exact feeling. these 2 pages are just perfect.
matt
dialog tweak gets a 👍 from me
