RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 90-91 remade !
🕑 Added 2021-03-29 01:35:19 +0000 UTCI had basically done 91 yesterday but here's the problem : since I added some butthandling action in the last page I redid (86 I think ?), I went back on the pages in between 86 and 91 to add some reddish marks on the cheeks and some bite marks on the nipls. When I got onto page 90 I realized that it just... It just wouldn't fly. It was one of the oldest redone page, entirely redone at that since I hadn't saved the original page properly (details here : https://www.patreon.com/posts/word-salad-23760552 ) which leads to it not meshing with page 91 well at all.
So I had to touch it up again. I tried to fix it quickly but it turned out to be quicker to just redo the lower panel's characters and I also redid the "can't spit you out" since it just looked lame. On the other hand, I forgot to add the reddish marks onto Larsen's cheek which was got me into checking those old pages. Good think is : I don't care enough to add it now !
Now, onto 91. It's finally one page that I didn't have to completely re-organize, in fact I thought the old one looks pretty okay still. Yet it doesn't mean I can salvage more than the background. I also think that Larsen's faces looked a bit more intense on the older page, at least on panel 2 but whatever. That one potential tiny flaw is eclipsed by Zee's amazing humping prowess displayed in panel 1. It's a pretty straight upgrade so I don't think I need to detail much of anything !
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matt
just realized that larsen's dick used to be kinda two-tone - white towards the bottom, purple further up - and now it's all purple!
