RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 75 remade + 73 hd
🕑 Added 2020-12-24 00:35:06 +0000 UTCSo, 73 HD. Here's the before after folder :
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1rqvbs0AhHkXSvBJQgKu35UspVeCur6CM?usp=sharing
And here's just the new pages :
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1axdXteUc7pbZZD6PljuDC7JINqTEkRoV?usp=sharing
Now, 75 ! Truth is I wanted to wait to have another page done to post with this one since there's nothing all that interesting about it buuuuut chistmas being near, I won't have anything ready for a little while. Next thing I'll post will likely be the Kiribaku pic.
But anyway, what changed in 75 ? Well everything, obviously. The original page's panel layout is random and doesn't really do anything to underline what it depicts. That's the last of this sequence of page that felt like filler to me. Technically, what happens on this one is important-ish (altho it might be one instance when Larsen's reluctance feels repetitive but whatever) but there's nothing of value to save beyond having Larsen asking to stop.
So I decided to let that moment linger. Which makes my life much easier too, it's pretty easy to draw !
That's about all that needs to be said, the rest is just obvious.
If I don't see you again before then (which,n let's be real, i won't) I wish you all a merry christmas ! Don't stuff yourself and vomit it all out like I usually do !
Comments
RodVonBoche
Thanks !
Jarrod
The pink haze fading away and the panels deteriorating as the page goes on, as well as the dripping between panels are all very nice touches to convey the crumbling excitement here. It may look like a plain page, but you get the message across very effectively, imho.
