RodVonBoche
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Disintegrit 74 remake !
🕑 Added 2020-12-18 14:38:12 +0000 UTCI said I'd post it in like an hour after the previous page buuuut it took longer than that, so long that I just wanted to go to bed and then I decided to modify a few things again when looking at it today...
Anyway, getting into details will tell you that it's brand new with nothing left of the old page, gasp, how unexpected, barely noticeable I know. Although t isn't changed quite as much as page 73 because, now that I look at it, the reason this page felt like filler to me is due to the absence of dialog moreso than anything else.
I think I was just going fancy on that one back in the day, much like I did in the page 50's (don't remember which) and decided for a few pages that dialogue just wasn't necessary ! I can get across what needs to be understood without words ! Which, to be fair, was true, but more importantly it just feels jarring to me nowadays. It just looks like something is missing.
But I do think the point of that page was comprehensible enough in the old version, which is to say Larsen is clearly enjoying this. Zee's eagerness looked a bit random tho so I pulled it back, I wanted to show they're getting into a comfortable bliss, which is also why the paneling is less angular or even less visible. Zee also says "I like you" to add to that, since it sounds like something that would also make Larsen feel good. I considered "I love you" but "I like you" just sound cuter and more natural ? I think ?
There's some issue with this page otherwise... I'm not fond of Larsen's face in the second panel, I tried to fix it but I'm also very much done with this page right now so fukkit !
An older problem that I can't do much about without having to change every subsequent page it the way the view flipped from looking at their right side to their left side. It's jarring but fixing it was basically impossible. So I made it worse ! In the old version, p.73 is mostly a top down view then Larsen's face from the front : no sides really seen. First panel of old 74 then clearly leans towards the right and thus the view switches progressively from one side to the other. Now ? It just immediately jumps into the other side with a profile of Larsen's butt being severely dicked. Which is nice, yaknow, I'm happy about that panel moreso than I was about Zee's face but the transition is not clean. Oh well.
But that'll do. I think that's all I have to say about this page !
Comments
RodVonBoche
Yep, seems like Zee instinctively knows just which spots to hit
RodVonBoche
What if your problem is prostate cancer ?
RodVonBoche
Thanks !
Jarrod
Look at Zee being a good top, pounding that prostate and whispering sweetness to his bottom. Also, "I like you" was the perfect word choice. Too early for love in their blossoming relationship. And it's so much cuter than saying "love" in this moment. Also the pink bliss cloud surrounding them is good imagery for what's happening.
matt
there's not a lot of problems in this life that can't be made better by someone fucking you in the butt, saying your name and telling you they like you. 🤗
Diego P
so cute
Rick2tails
those 2 have such nice cocks . your remake on this page looks so much better not that the old version was bad but this is damn good!
