RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 123 remade !
🕑 Added 2021-08-21 19:55:36 +0000 UTCThere isn't too much to detail, it's basically the same page but drawn over in the same poses and everything. In general I had no big problems with the latter part of the comic past 110 or so, I mean they never looked great but structurally there were few pages that really itched me to redo them.
I did change some panels slightly, old panel 2 was weird since it focused on Larsen's hair for some reason. Which was silly. And panel 4's Zee has a different expression, I think he looks more surprised and funny now without going overboard silly but mostly I changed it for the sake of changing it, the old one was relatively fine.
That's about it ! I think there's 2 pages left.
Comments
matt
furbot search male/male holding_ears
Eldkatten
Again, the new version is much easier to read and grasp for me. For example I didn't see Larsen grabbing *both* of Zee's ears, I only saw one. And again, thank you for the great work.
