RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 117 remake
🕑 Added 2021-07-15 02:19:55 +0000 UTCThere's not too much to say about this page, you can tell it's basically the same. But I'll still detail some stuff out cos it actually took me some work, probably more than it deserved since the old one wasn't thaaaat bad except for one big problem. I probably could have given less effort to get that one done but oh well....
A bunch of the panels are entirely redone, even the background, starting with the first one. There was nothing too wrong with it but a general problem with the entire page : the characters look too small compared to the background. Otherwise I just tried to give Dani and Marcus (I think the snail's name is Marcus, it's been a while) a little more personality fitting to their dialogue.
It's in panel 4 and 5 that you can see how disproportionate the size of the couch was compared to Zee in particular. It's one of those issue I noticed years ago and has been bothering me ever since... But it's fixed now ! I even gave Zee a sexier pose in panel 4, not that the moment necessitates a sexy pose at all. But whatever, he looks better.
Really, that's about it. I don't know if I'll start working on the june poll winner or a Bromance Done page next but both comics are nearing their ends now. I think DIsintegrity is like 5 pages away from being done and Bromance done, 2 ? It's gonna be weird for me.
Comments
RodVonBoche
Yeh
tegirvaru
I really like the way you've been drawing Larsen's face recently. for some reason he looks like my ex bf and and I LOVE him, lol.
Diego P
Is that a giant snail?
RodVonBoche
It's not tiring really, no more than other comics. If anything, those remake pages still are easier than normal new comics since I have to fit to the process I started with, which is a less complicated process than Bromance Done goes through for example.
RodVonBoche
I'll probably do some other short comics when these are done so it's gonna be a short chapter I guess
RodVonBoche
Nope, I never did much with her, altho a patron of years past had me draw a couple of pics with her in it. But I also drew Dani in the background of some other comics for the hell of it on occasions
gurlow
come to think of it we haven't seen dani in a lot of artwork have we?
Jarrod
The new page looks beautiful. The lines are clean and the characters look great. Larsen's expression in the last pane, I think, suits the situation much better. I can't believe we're nearing the end. Gonna miss these updates. But I am excited for you to begin a new chapter in your life too!
Eldkatten
As with the previous page, I like the new Danielle: in the old version, first panel, she looks like a scolded schoolgirl, like, but now she radiates her strong personality. Badder, somehow. (I know the actual form should be "bad"- "worse", but that doesn't hit the point here: Danille doesn't look "worse" but, well, badder.) Also, that's a much nicer guitar, and Zee's expression now is really like "sigh" now, in the old version it was more like "huh?" Is it really so few pages until the whole comic is redone completely? So these sessions of you explaining what you have changed and why will end, too? It's a pity, but I'm sure it has been tiring for you and still is. Thank you for your effort!
matt
I do really like the tweaks to Dani in this scene. she's like - just as expressive, but a little less cartoonish, and I like it.
