RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 115 remade + 106 HD
🕑 Added 2021-07-12 02:11:43 +0000 UTCFirst off, Disintegrity 106 HD : Just the new pages - https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1axdXteUc7pbZZD6PljuDC7JINqTEkRoV?usp=sharing
Old and new - https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1rqvbs0AhHkXSvBJQgKu35UspVeCur6CM?usp=sharing
115 remade is not too different from the original. At first I thought that there was some stuff I could salvage and maybe there was but I still redrew every character in the end.
One of the changes I think is unimportant in the grand scheme of things but still looks betters here is the way Dani points her finger. In the old page, it's like a finger-gun. But in the new one, her finger gun is held gansta style. Well, to me it just looks more uppity and accusatory in the new page than it did in the old one. It certainly makes the second panel look less awkward pose-wise, despite Dani... actually BEING more awkward.
I had to scale the characters around a bit since I thought Larsen was too small on the old page, so now he bigger. Same with Dani who might be too big in the second panel but it's fiiiine. With these changes made, I had to redraw the background on the first two panels.
And that's that ! Really, there's not much to tell that's not immediately obvious just by looking. So look with your looky eyes.
Comments
RodVonBoche
I see your probably accidental wordplay, I see it.
RodVonBoche
My thinking is more that Larsen feels ashamed/embarassed being seen in this situation. Also the crosses are painted on the walls ! Zee's just into goth shit.
gurlow
shoulda said "i'm infiltrating the enemy, WITH MY MASSIVE CAWK".
Plush_Kat
The first thing that I noticed about the finger was the blur effect. I think that it was a nice touch.
Eldkatten
I like the new Danille. Her finger caught my eye, too, but it was the fact that in the old page she points at Zee, emphasizing "YOU are in bed...", while now she is pointing at Zee, like "... the ENIMY". What gets clearer now (because Larsen was too small, I agree) is Larsen curling up either like "I don't see you, so you can't see me" or "Please don't hit me". Bad ass Larsen can't be afraid of Danielle, can he? Says much about her (earned?) reputation. Or, as we have seen earlier, Larsen has a shy and tender side, and maybe he just can't stand loud and exhilarated Danielle? And are there two shadows like cemetery crosses on the wall above Larsen and Zee in the second panel? Danielle, what are you planning to do? Though with only little changes, the page has improved a lot in my eyes.
Diego P
Angry Zee is very hot
