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Disintegrity 104 remade !
🕑 Added 2021-05-16 00:51:16 +0000 UTCOnce again, there isn't necessarily much to compare. The scenes depicted don't have much in common anymore but there's still some of the thought process worth explaining maybe.
Like the first panel being a mostly "normal" sideview after the more dramatic angles of the previous page was there to slow things down a notch cos there's no more humping, just sploojing deep in there, the excitement is meant to die down.
The next two panels are again more reasons for Larsen to be apparently a little less ecstatic about what happened. And also because it's a lot hotter to see larsen taking it on the face a bit when in the old comic it was just in his mouth and you didn't see his reaction at all until the following page.
The last few panels are actually the only thing that sorta remains of the old page, unless you consider the x-ray shot inside Larsen's mouth atop the page which I don't cos I wasn't even trying to bring that back, it just happens to be there in both versions.
But anyway, those last 2 panels on the new page correspond to panel 3-4 or the old page. There's nothing to say about them really ! The comic just had to get back onto the rails pre-established in the old version at some point, not that it'll stay on those rails for long since 105 also won't remain identical to its older counterpart. I have to deal with a lot of stuff on Larsen's face that simply wasn't there in the old comic now...
Once there, we'll be done with all the beejay stuff. Back when i was first making the comic, I wasn't too into that, I think it's only by seeing another comic show it off done well (probably one of Peritian's comics ? I don't remember for sure) that I wanted to do it but it was pretty half-hearted and uninspired in Disintegrity. It was especially lame since this was basically the capping of the SECKS scenes in the comic (more or less), what a let-down to finish it off. Well now I'd say it's pretty good and it finally gives Zee the, hm-hm, closure he deserves.
I'll probably go onto Bromance done next for page 4 but before that I might have a comished comic page to post ssssunday maybe ? Depending on when the comishoner gets back to me
Comments
RodVonBoche
Yeh, I actually made two sketches for Larsen there, one where we see the butt and the one we ended up with. We've seen plenty of his butt so I thought the other side was better, plus it highlights that maybe he's enjoying it just a bit...
RodVonBoche
That's probably the first time I've seen "abysmal" used as a positive descriptor but anyway thanks !
RodVonBoche
I know right ? The old one was like "okay splooj there, moving on"
Jarrod
This page is amazing! It feels so much more climactic than the old one. Very hot action.
Eldkatten
I think you forgot to mention something that at least I find important. Since we get a side view in the upper panel different from the angle in the old panel 2, we also get a look at Larsen's dick, which has been pretty absent since pages (ten, to be precise 😉 ). And what a look! It's sturdily stiff, throbbing and oozing. Yeay! for that 😄
Diego P
The difference is abysmal! Awesome job!
