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Disintegrity 44 remade
🕑 Added 2020-02-21 01:03:33 +0000 UTCWell... Took one more day than anticipated still. Fuck this page my god what a absolute chore it was to do what the fuck. It's taken so long I don't even remember what I changed and why.
But as usual, pretty much everything had to be redone and when there's a bajillion tiny little shitty panels it take me forever. Back then I'm pretty sure than tny panels actually weren't time consuming, I could pump them out fast but now that I'm paying a tad more attention to my art it's the opposite. I hate it so much. I'm not even entirely happy with the pageity just UFCKM NEFHNDBSLHKUFW
Right. Bad mood. This really was a chore. Hate this. So much. I'm not even happy with the final results but I don't care, I'm never touching this again. Let's get through it.
You know what who cares. Look at it, there's nothing interesting to detail. Fuck this page.
ANYWAY, in news, I have decided that I'll do the pages in order from now on. So the next Disintegrity page (which, at the rythm I got, will be done next week since I can't fucking do a page in less than that apparently yay yaaaaaaaaay) will be 25 or 26 or whichever the oldest page not yet redone is. It'll be easier for me to keep track of and to post.
Comments
Eldkatten
Before the change, this was one of my least favorite pages of the story: just lines and colored blops (in my vision, which is not too good in percieving art) and anatomically awkward bends (at least in my vision, now I see that they were shoes and pieces of clothing). I have to reconsider now, and I second every word and aspect @matt brought up.
matt
showing more of the kiss in panel six is a definite improvement - and really overall seeing more of zee's OH MY GOD WE'RE DOING IT expression helps to clarify the tone of the scene as well. oh and I like the cleanup in the last panel - definitely makes it a little more clear that they're taking that next "fuck we need to get rid of some of these clothes so we can smoosh our bodies together more effectively" step.
