RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 76 remade !
🕑 Added 2020-02-07 02:28:46 +0000 UTCOkay this one wasn't really done randomly, I picked it cos I thought I could do it fast and I WAS WRONG. But whatever. Now there's a little continuity ! But 72-75 aren't done, neither is 79. I had counted recently how far this project was from completion, it was something like 66% done. So more than halfway but 40 something page left to do, which is a lot since they basically require almost complete remaking instead of "remastering".
But anyway, let's talk about p. 76.
I added some blur.
Thank you ! I'm done talking about it.
Comments
RodVonBoche
I'm not belittling the changes really, it's more that the changes don't require much explanations. Also the pointy teeth were actually the right row of upper teeth rooted to the gum. It looks awful indeed (mostyl because the shading doesn't highlight the difference in depth) but it was never meant to be pointy teeth.
Eldkatten
Much clearer and better faces, yay! :-) Don't belittle yourself, you've done much more than some blurr. I didn't like that page particularly before - mostly because of the faces, which one either couldn't see properly or were...ummm...unclear - , but I do like it now. Thank you for the good work! Also in the old version Larsen has strangly pointed teeth (panel 4), doesn't fit him, and corrected now. And - oh! - that zickzack tail of Larsen's in the third panel! :-) "I don't like it.", suuuure ;-)
