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Disintegrity 77 remake !
🕑 Added 2020-02-04 03:04:54 +0000 UTCFor whatever reason, that page was super time consuming to redo. Sucks when that happens, but there we are... I choose pages randomly still so doing 77 right after 78 was a coincidence but now I can put them in a little sequence.
So, what changed ? Well, it starts as soon as panel 1 since the remake now has a new panel. I'm not sure the panel is entirely comprehensible visually but it doesn't matter too much, it's just there for pacing. I feel like having a zoom on Larsen's butt being suddenly pounded is better than jumping straight into the big picture.
Speaking of the big picture, it's basically the same. So let's not speak of it !
Next panel contains the one bit of old design remaining : Larsen's foot uses some of the old linework ! That's it, that's the one thing on the page relating to the characters that was retained from the old page. Everything else is new.
Bottom left panel is meh either way. I wasn't fond of his expression before so I changed it, now I'm not fond of his new expression. But I don't care enough to redo it. Plus it's still a massive improvement because god DAMN do I hate the way I drew Zee's hair back then. I even hated it then.
Last panel was one I was happy with for a short whil when I made it then I couldn't help but notice that Larsen's hip looks ungodly large and thus I started liking it less. It also was an impressive split. Technically it still is (the kick required him to do the split ! Shhh don't think about the logistics off it all) but the pose on that last panel emphasizes it less.
I changed Zee's pose. Not much reason for it beside he's shouting so his mouth should be open.
So that's IT. BYE I'm gonna sleep
Comments
Jarrod
Larsen is hella flexible. You mentioned the legs in the comment but damn that's a crazy back bend too!
Eldkatten
Nice how the new first panel (upper left) has the shape of an exclamation mark. And I do understand it, though I often have problems with zooms in small sections.
