RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 78 remake !
🕑 Added 2020-01-26 03:09:12 +0000 UTCNot putting these in a small serie for context since either 77 nor 79 were remade. So yeh. Just 78.
So, once again... except for backgrounds bits here and there and some words... Everything is remade. I remmber liking this page back then and it's not tooooo awful but it's just faster to redo than to fix but as far as changes go there's obviously not much to talk about.
Panel one had the kick which I thought looked really cool back then and honestly ? Still do. The angle is nice, the leg doesn't look terrible today, in fact it's mostly the same in terms of linework. Still, stuff needed fixing, like Zee's borked and emotionless face.
Panel 2 just has Larsen's feet in a less twisted position. It kinda looks like Zee's is gonna french kiss them now but WHATEVER, it seemed more natural to have Zee's face show more instead of being neckless.
Panel 3 is the one that looked the worse back then, Larsen's face just looked busy, the linework was inconsistent and worst of all : he had no abs. Plus dick.
I also changed his expression to look less somber so that Zee's refusal to stop plapping his buttcheeks look less egregious and his comments more accurate. Larsen's not crying niagara falls anymore, he's just angrily pouting.
So yeah, not much to talk about.
Comments
RodVonBoche
The nostrils aren't shared by the demon or the werewolf tho.
Eldkatten
Oh, so it IS Larsen... I'm not going to spoil it on Twitter, though ;-) May I ask what is the basically unique? The "shaky" uneven pupils are just a stilistic device, right? Is it the angular nostrils, though shared with the Demon and the Werewolf? I think it might be the jagged hairline framing the face?
matt
glad to see larsen isn't such a crybaby in the redux 😁
RodVonBoche
Also both Zee and Larsen have only one opened in pane 1 and 3. Just noticed that, didn't pay attention to it. I don't know if it really matters but they have that same quirck on panel right next to each other. Oh well.
