RodVonBoche
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Disintegrity 68 remake !
🕑 Added 2020-01-16 03:08:36 +0000 UTCThis one is biug full remake. The only thing left from the old one is that one speech bubble from Zee with a snifl.
So why the changes ? Well, first panel changed because it's unecessarily big, so it's smaller now. What was the need for such a massive zoom ? Dunnow. It is also rather similar to that of subsequent pages so I made it sideview instead of more front facing. I gave the balls more momentum too cos it looks more fun. Especially since I draw them round and heavy looking now, cos it's more enticing imagining them smashing on the butt/taint of the bottom. I kinda didn't care about balls back then, or genitals in general. It was just a thing. Now I understand how to make a scene sexier so... balls
Panel 2 is mostly the same but better, the pose looks less crowded and we can actually see Zee's face now.
But even then I thought it'd be better to have the words he say be visualized with a more frontal view of his happy face so that's partly why I added a third panel. The other reason is to see a smoother transition towards angry larsen of p.69. The whole page layout might be a bit repetitive of p.67 (not yet remade) but whatever, I'll think about it then. For now it's a much better read.
Okay buh-bye
Comments
RodVonBoche
I know, right ? It wasn't that satisfying of a transition, the better set up makes a decent difference in flow.
RodVonBoche
I'm pretty happy with how sexy it's all turning out to be, gotta say.
matt
I like the shift in perspective, to show more grumpy larsen face. also this is some good sex drawing.
Eldkatten
Thanks alot for the great work! And for the additional panel. All you say about it is true, it's very good to see Larsen's face (and Zee's, too), and it makes a much smoother transition to the next page, especially emotionwise.
